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Exquisite Corpse

Fooling Depression	Contributor
Fake smiles and happy lies,	Zbird
painted in reds and blues, makeup for lack	varivas
finds its' way round dreams... reach for the pen	induce
swap for sanity, some lines	questionajourney
of inanity, or maybe cocaine	varivas
dull the pain temporarily	Zbird
extract symptoms to evaluate	questionajourney
up oN ann eRa ov sub Tear Fuge . . . . ..	induce
secret messages must be hidden in poems	varivas
aS metA 4 hingeS Up On CircuiTs' BaLL LanCe	induce
asthma binges upon the circus thought ballast	questionajourney
befriend Doktor Von Hargan	induce
stay to betray him in the end	varivas
the obsession crept and wouldn't cease	questionajourney
would not give me a moments peace	Zbird
at a pace only time could keep	questionajourney

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So... now what... (Score: 1 )
by varivas on Friday, May 23, 2008 (15:05:04)

I've been encouraged to join a corpse, and now I have. But to be honest, I don't have the foggiest idea what to do!!!

Re: So... now what... by induce on Tuesday, June 24

what can we see (Score: 1 )
by varivas on Friday, May 23, 2008 (19:20:39)

Okay, I came out here and saw a line of the poem, so wrote another to follow it. Now I can only see my line. Can someone explain how this works?

Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Friday, May 23, 2008 (22:00:01)

LOL!! so here we are the blind leading the blind. I can see your line, but not the line I put in...it was my line first right? so maybe this is one where no one can see the entire poem until it's over. going to go check the other one we're doing. what a hoot!

Re: Have Foooon by induce on Sunday, May 25