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Exquisite Corpse

Death By Love/	Contributor
today it started. a brain corpses itself under the weight of it's	darkblues
tender mood psychosis...	questionajourney
enduring reflex, discord	darkblues
tearing body skin from soul	Beloved49
searing pain the axe through heart	darkblues
tearing body skin from soul	Beloved49
searing pain axe through heart	darkblues
lifeless my mind is empied of reason	Beloved49
beauty is free in the air	induce
like transparent scalpel flows	darkblues
deep into my hollow heart	Beloved49
facing inside the eyelid he preys	induce
midsts, the falling shadow	darkblues
induce, free of procrastination	induce
clouds loom relapse reverses	darkblues
static subsides, finger in the socket	induce

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Re: damn!!! (Score: 1 )
by darkblues on Thursday, April 23, 2009 (21:57:08)

i pressed enter before i had finished typing...'...it's own anticipation//expectation' i had something like that in mind...

Re: second line (Score: 1 )
by Beloved49 on Monday, May 04, 2009 (20:18:48)

Hope I did this right.

Melanie- Beloved49

Re: next line? (Score: 1 )
by Beloved49 on Monday, May 04, 2009 (20:44:28)

lifeless My mind is empied of reason