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Exquisite Corpse

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In the heat of summer, Rebecca looked up at the sky, and saw what whe has never noticed before.	butterflyzrfree
Sometihng so numinous with striking blends of hue. She saw lightness linger displaying scenes of dreams!	PinkNeonFlavor
A beautiful dream, of clouds and happy things where she could rise from the earth and fly. should she go towrds the light?	butterflyzrfree
With every positive notion, she shall lend out her hand to golden days. For the serene cosmos will intake her soul to such grandeur.	PinkNeonFlavor
But there were certain requirements to attain this. First she must be aproved by the angels, beautiful angles, smiling peacefully and placidely across the way. They motioned for her to fly over.	butterflyzrfree
She will begin to fly over, in such a world of purity. One that's been around since the days you call "antiquity." Angels of dazzling wings will cover her for protection against the dark. With this, she shall attain this.	PinkNeonFlavor
Instruction is recieved from the oldest, wisest angel, with the iridescent wings. She is fragile now, having received a sacred cleansing bath, whick has made her reborn, ready to become one of them. It will take time, and instruction into the secrets of t	butterflyzrfree
The wisest angel descended from the father of purity. Her woes made her stronger, influencing the next mother to happiness. She is to become an angel, yes that's true. An angel, of much power with a heart of love.	PinkNeonFlavor
Purity will give her the ability to pass the love into the spirits of humanity. In the stillness of a beautilful song, they will feel a jolt, jump, then fall. On awakening a feeling of	butterflyzrfree
Anticipaition, as stars will dazzle; making the moon strike out to beguile the eye. Fear less, as desolated smiles become real. She will fly above for infinity.	PinkNeonFlavor
Turning for one last look at earth, she saw the trees, the green rice paddies, the blue and green waters and the colored fish below them. Whales and porpises jumped, and people came and waved at her.	butterflyzrfree
But the waves were their sincerest goodbies. No more waters below for her to rest upon. For now, she is living in a sublime heaven. As the angels finally drafted her in.	PinkNeonFlavor
They sent Rebecca on her first mission; in another galaxy. Red, yellow and blue rings surrounded this planed. She felt no heat or cold passing through the gaseous rings.	butterflyzrfree
The first mission to give her recognition of her nobility. Spunk was soaring through her veins as her heart began to accelorate. She had an intuition that she was to fly through them caring less about barriers.	PinkNeonFlavor
The old angel came with,knowing what she was about to sak "but I must care for my people...' "Yes, what makes you think they live only on earth??" he replied	butterflyzrfree
I've never really seen any angels in a place like this and I would love to stay...as the angel said "you're here" along other angels who were people that did great things.	PinkNeonFlavor
Flying directly towards the planets surface, Rebecca say green rice paddies, blue oceans , trees, and people waving at her. this planet was not earth but the people , did they have the character, the spunk, the life of those on earth?	butterflyzrfree
Eager to find out that these people were very much the same that there was one difference. The way that wings of such purity and such a dazzlingg low...their fuzzy texture and everything captivated Rebecca's eye	PinkNeonFlavor
"They are ahead of us", thought Rebecca excitedly. Someday, somehow, the people from my howme will end up here! As one flew up to gilve her a golden flower...	butterflyzrfree
Oh, how correct she is. She sees prophecies of the grandest idea happening. Her loved ones on Earth are to come, and everyone. As it is destined for everyone to be united here...she thought in excitement...	PinkNeonFlavor

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Re: [No Subject] (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, February 25, 2010 (01:56:58)

I forgot to add the title!