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[quote="BrokenWordsPoet"]Iridium came back this morning and posted another poem and that goes to show as Rory said if you give someone a shout out they may come back. We can only wish they would stay ...

Hi James and everyone else involved in this discussion,
I never really gave much thought to posting poems in the appropriate genre before until I read James' post. I think that the poets intention ...

Thank you, anna I appreciate your advice

I couldn't help but see my signature while I was reading your post.I wonder if Iridium will maintain form under high pressure during this most stressful od events. Thanks agin Rose, for taking the tim ...

Thanks , Rose, some common sense advice like yours will help calm the nerves.....I get really bad with those when I am doing something new....

I am doing a poetry reading on August 21st at the Charles Allis Art Library in Milwaukee, Wisconsin. I did slam in prison but this is different, it will really be my first poetry reading. I need advic ...

I agree with Wylde. Tyr to shorten each sentence down to its bare bones by changing verb tenses or dropping a couple adjectives. That's how I do it but then again, I don't know everything. Iridium

I love your version and your suggestions although I naturally tend to be a bit more of a minimalist. But I certainly want poeple to know Memphis was a person. Thank you so much for your time and energ ...

Okay, Memphis is a person who commited suicide. This poem didn't get much response and I encourage any further critique you might have. To me it made perfect sense but that just isn't good enough. Tha ...

Brush Velvet skin
Blue as Blood and sky
Colors only Death knows
Revealing the hearts sadness.Original Poem[/i]