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thank you all so much for the comments. greatly appriceiated ^_^

The word flow and the visualation is nice.

thank you so much! lol im impressed with myself. my boyfriend read your reply to my poem first and was SO upset and i laughed because i have nothing but appreciation for you. when i was writing this p ...

everything has changed

you know that place we used to go
out in the field where the flowers grow
remember how the breeze would blow

but everything has changed

remember how you held my hand
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if given with no resent it simply a persent
a gift is shinig pure
but if a curse is given with no thought to repent
is the devils surest lure

harsh path to enligtenment

i was that weird girl dancing the halls stuck in my fairy kissed world my altered reality
you where that slave to pop culture fuck anything that moves true son of vanity ...

very new to the poetry scene i would like to tell you that you are an inspiration to me... to take something as mudane as a hair cut and spin it into a raw masterpeice of syntax is mind blowing... tha ...

this poem is amazing... as a matter of fact im sad that i was only allowed to read it and not listen to you recite it for a poem with passion like this, meant to be felt in the core of ones soul cant ...

So what hurts more....
when you wish to no longer feel
or when you realize this life is real
and your stuck to try and deal

what hurts more...
knowing that depression is not the fear of dieing ...