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The Rewrite Workshop By submitting a poem to this section you are asking others to basically tell you how they would write it themselves. If you post here you are saying that the poem is not working for me, help me tear it apart and rework it. Responses in this forum are supposed to really help you tear a poem apart and rework it. This is the only section where it is acceptable to rewrite a person's poem for them without permission.		Go to page Previous 1, 2, 3, 4 ... 13, 14, 15 Next
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	The Rewrite Workshop: Posting Guidelines	1	John	2332	Mon Dec 13 15:16:38 EST 2004 John
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	3rd Revision-help!	2	JoyfulPoet	232	Thu Nov 13 21:05:19 EST 2008 Treagal
	HELP ME WRITE A POEM BASED ON THIS [ Go to page: 1, 2 ]	27	zhaul	1772	Thu Nov 13 16:23:07 EST 2008 pixietude
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	Desire	13	mamta	799	Wed Aug 20 14:56:39 EDT 2008 cauchy3
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	Mockingbird	4	sumer	530	Wed Aug 20 14:06:25 EDT 2008 cauchy3
	Potential.... at least, that's the subject matter	4	sakhara291	557	Sat Aug 16 20:37:09 EDT 2008 bfaulkner
	Just something I started on my lunchbreak; your thoughts?	9	oldschooldetroit	878	Mon Aug 4 9:35:48 EDT 2008 oldschooldetroit
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	Rhyme scheme too hokey?	6	mackjones	504	Thu Jun 19 18:47:27 EDT 2008 mackjones
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