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I'm having a minimalist phase
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spectre_chasm
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 Posted: Fri Nov 7 15:16:42 EST 2008 Post subject: I'm having a minimalist phase |
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Entropy
Things fall apart longing
for an earlier time of chaos
and peace.
Structure is not
an order appealing to stars, or planets,
or hearts.
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| Posted: Fri Nov 7 20:06:58 EST 2008 Post subject: Re: I'm having a minimalist phase |
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I like this very much.
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| Posted: Fri Nov 7 22:22:36 EST 2008 Post subject: Re: I'm having a minimalist phase |
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Well with comments like that I reckon I'll go ahead and post it. Thanks
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| Posted: Fri Nov 7 23:13:38 EST 2008 Post subject: Re: I'm having a minimalist phase |
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As for minimalism, sometimes "less" is just right.
I love the juxtaposition of chaos and peace. Nicely done.
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