Glaring at me from an
intricately designed vase

Watching me pace
back and forth

Calling me to come
take a whiff
while reading those lines

Light hits you perfect
in that corner
by the door

Wishing you would stink
just a little
yet your aroma
fills this room

Wishing you were rotting
with spots of black and brown
overtaking you

Yet your color of sex- me -red
is so beautiful and elegant

Not forgetting timeless
with that timelessness effect

From the poetry section, read the original here: Original Poem

The opening lines are awesome...
I like the imagery you have used and the personal touch this poem has.
Your emotions expressed belie your feigned hatred for the roses.

I like what I read.

Cheers
Sandy

thank you so much much Sandy
i try my best use imagery so the person who reads the poem
gets involved

thank you again

Why do you wish your lovely roses to rot? Nice poem.

they are from someone that wants a relationship

i still haven't reAD that card lol
and thanks for the comment

very nice! two minor nits - intricate dasigned vase (should it be intricately designed vase?) and not forgetting timeless (timelessness?). both are just suggestions to use or lose.

enjoyed this!

thank u for the insight
of words

glad u enjoyed

Oh, too bad for him...

Well done angeroseblue

Thank you so much
BleedingHope
i hope you liked it