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Rebel-Kartel Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Mon Mar 30 15:04:51 EDT 2009 Post subject: what a ride! |
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My mind wounders
lost in a world full
of thoughts and metaphors
sometime taking me to
places i can't defind but
i just sit back and enjoy
the ride
entertained and amazed
at the way my mind inturpet
and disect everything
what a ride...
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fogglethorpe Who knew we would get this far?


                 
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Posted: Wed Apr 1 12:14:44 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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...what a ride, life;
the object is
not to hit a pole.
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Photogeek_Kartel Intrigued


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Posted: Wed Apr 1 19:04:09 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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Not to hit a pole
maybe its unavoidable
better wear a seat belt
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Rebel-Kartel Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Thu Apr 2 19:59:44 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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better wear a seatbelt
yes, this ride out of
control, but i am in
control of the uncontrollable
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jubabeast I might even come back next week!


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Posted: Sun Apr 26 23:46:06 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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Control of the uncontrollable?
They said it couldn't be done!
But I put on a belt,
a fine vest of felt,
and blasted it dead with a gun.
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Posted: Thu Jun 25 1:25:17 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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And blasted it with a gun
i did what i had to do
the uncontrollable needed controlling
you would have done the same thing too
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jubabeast I might even come back next week!


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Posted: Tue Jun 30 20:04:11 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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You would have done the same thing too,
if you had of been put in my place,
life pretends to give you a choice
then it slaps you hard in the face.
Because, when you pick yourself up,
where you are is where you will be.
You'll probably kick at the bricks,
but you may as well offer them tea.
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aphroditespen Has written a poem or two


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Posted: Tue Jun 30 20:53:04 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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...but you may as well offer them tea and a seat
They ain't going nowhere
and at DEAD END you'll meet
an opportune time
to pull out a rhyme
to cajole those old bricks
and slick 'em with tricks
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Posted: Thu Jul 9 23:26:29 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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and slick em' with tricks
until being victimized is wanted
and the truth is rejected
put the real heroes behind bars
and killers on the streets
oh... to be one of the selected
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Posted: Fri Jul 10 4:00:49 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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oh... to be one of the selected
rhymes infected with a juice
for a bOOst!
oh... pick it up
some beats per minute
not 80 prooF
wheel down the window
pop a sign
maxin' out let it define
there's no rules of house
on the rewind
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Posted: Fri Jul 10 7:31:20 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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on the rewind
all things are said and done
the intimacy you find
is actually in fun
Holding head down in shame
Kiss away your thoughts
not knowing the name
of the feelings that are fought
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aphroditespen Has written a poem or two


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Posted: Fri Jul 10 9:21:38 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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Of the feelings that are fought
a few names seem apropos
call it Lust
call it Want
Off-the-chain
Slow down now , WHOA
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Posted: Fri Jul 10 9:31:24 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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Slow down now, WHOA
the bounty is fierce
What do you say?
Ride with me well...most of the waY!
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angeroseblue I have posted over 2800 times!


  
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Posted: Fri Jul 10 10:07:53 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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Ride with me well....most of the way
the reward is mine to receive
so thanks for your company
your intellect i had to deceive
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Posted: Fri Jul 10 10:59:08 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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your intellect i had to decieve
positioned:
layered by decreed
a decoy
when in need:
at a fascinating speed!
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aphroditespen Has written a poem or two


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Posted: Fri Jul 10 15:04:03 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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At a fascinating speed
Is this what I signed up for?
You've deceived me,
but believe me
I think I'm want more
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NoGoody Galileo is laughing at you from on high


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Posted: Sat Jul 11 0:47:36 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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I think I'll want more,
of that redline ride.
9500 rpms,
full throttle inside.
Once top speed is reached,
inject the bottle and fly.
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induce Who knew we would get this far?


      
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Posted: Sat Jul 11 4:51:23 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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inject the bottle and fly!
to the moon
no reason why;
conversion
transmission
~intermission~
Whom landed first?
Was this rehearsed or reversed?
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Posted: Sat Jul 11 23:05:47 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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Was this rehearsed or reversed?
Questions superfluous
Answers terse
Where was this ship going?
(My anxiety's showing)
So we jetted to space
As if in a race
And now that we're here
What next now, my dears?
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Posted: Sun Jul 12 0:52:16 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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Searching for strange creatures
in the vast open lands
heat so deadly hot
eating up the greenest sands
an animal of different sorts
appears in the mist
talking in his native tongue
holding out a list
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Posted: Sun Jul 12 7:18:46 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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holding out a list
of people I've kissed
wondering where they all went
if kisses are worth a cent
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Posted: Sun Jul 12 22:25:38 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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if kisses are worth a cent
maybe they should be less
probing at my lips
looking through a mess
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Posted: Mon Jul 13 3:37:34 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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looking through a mess
curser less
vagrant vilian vespiary
hinging on the ride
you sea
multitasking glee
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aphroditespen Has written a poem or two


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Posted: Mon Jul 13 7:12:07 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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multtasking glee indeed
hungry eyes with need to feed
no passive lips
but lips with quips
...and oh, that 'list'
now here's the gist...
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Posted: Mon Jul 13 7:22:45 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: what a ride! |
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now here's the gist...
within the mist of that list
came a quite interesting twist
all the names of every man on the land
were brought to me on this strange sand
their fates now in my hands
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