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PostPosted: Mon Mar 30 15:04:51 EDT 2009    Post subject: what a ride! Reply with quote

My mind wounders
lost in a world full
of thoughts and metaphors

sometime taking me to
places i can't defind but
i just sit back and enjoy
the ride

entertained and amazed
at the way my mind inturpet
and disect everything

what a ride...

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 1 12:14:44 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

...what a ride, life;
the object is
not to hit a pole.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 1 19:04:09 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

Not to hit a pole
maybe its unavoidable
better wear a seat belt
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 2 19:59:44 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

better wear a seatbelt
yes, this ride out of
control, but i am in
control of the uncontrollable

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 26 23:46:06 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

Control of the uncontrollable?
They said it couldn't be done!
But I put on a belt,
a fine vest of felt,
and blasted it dead with a gun.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 25 1:25:17 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

And blasted it with a gun
i did what i had to do
the uncontrollable needed controlling
you would have done the same thing too

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30 20:04:11 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

You would have done the same thing too,
if you had of been put in my place,
life pretends to give you a choice
then it slaps you hard in the face.

Because, when you pick yourself up,
where you are is where you will be.
You'll probably kick at the bricks,
but you may as well offer them tea.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 30 20:53:04 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

...but you may as well offer them tea and a seat
They ain't going nowhere
and at DEAD END you'll meet
an opportune time
to pull out a rhyme
to cajole those old bricks
and slick 'em with tricks
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 9 23:26:29 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

and slick em' with tricks
until being victimized is wanted
and the truth is rejected

put the real heroes behind bars
and killers on the streets
oh... to be one of the selected

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10 4:00:49 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

oh... to be one of the selected
rhymes infected with a juice
for a bOOst!

oh... pick it up
some beats per minute
not 80 prooF

wheel down the window
pop a sign
maxin' out let it define
there's no rules of house

on the rewind
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10 7:31:20 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

on the rewind
all things are said and done
the intimacy you find
is actually in fun

Holding head down in shame
Kiss away your thoughts
not knowing the name
of the feelings that are fought

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10 9:21:38 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

Of the feelings that are fought
a few names seem apropos
call it Lust
call it Want
Off-the-chain
Slow down now , WHOA
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10 9:31:24 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

Slow down now, WHOA
the bounty is fierce
What do you say?
Ride with me well...most of the waY!
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10 10:07:53 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

Ride with me well....most of the way
the reward is mine to receive
so thanks for your company
your intellect i had to deceive

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10 10:59:08 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

your intellect i had to decieve
positioned:
layered by decreed
a decoy
when in need:
at a fascinating speed!
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 10 15:04:03 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

At a fascinating speed
Is this what I signed up for?
You've deceived me,
but believe me
I think I'm want more
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 11 0:47:36 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

I think I'll want more,
of that redline ride.
9500 rpms,
full throttle inside.
Once top speed is reached,
inject the bottle and fly.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 11 4:51:23 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

inject the bottle and fly!
to the moon
no reason why;

conversion
transmission

~intermission~

Whom landed first?
Was this rehearsed or reversed?
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 11 23:05:47 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

Was this rehearsed or reversed?
Questions superfluous
Answers terse
Where was this ship going?
(My anxiety's showing)

So we jetted to space
As if in a race
And now that we're here
What next now, my dears?
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 12 0:52:16 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

Searching for strange creatures
in the vast open lands
heat so deadly hot
eating up the greenest sands

an animal of different sorts
appears in the mist
talking in his native tongue
holding out a list

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 12 7:18:46 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

holding out a list
of people I've kissed
wondering where they all went
if kisses are worth a cent
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 12 22:25:38 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

if kisses are worth a cent
maybe they should be less
probing at my lips
looking through a mess

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 13 3:37:34 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

looking through a mess
curser less
vagrant vilian vespiary
hinging on the ride
you sea
multitasking glee
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 13 7:12:07 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

multtasking glee indeed
hungry eyes with need to feed
no passive lips
but lips with quips
...and oh, that 'list'
now here's the gist...
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 13 7:22:45 EDT 2009    Post subject: Re: what a ride! Reply with quote

now here's the gist...
within the mist of that list
came a quite interesting twist

all the names of every man on the land
were brought to me on this strange sand
their fates now in my hands

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