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lorraine
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 Posted: Wed Feb 11 18:12:34 EST 2009 Post subject: GOD IS |
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Sitting in a jet plane
taken from point A to B
God is my pilot
all I have to do
is Be
far below in the distance
people live their lives
unaware
busy
preoccupied
like ants scurrying
purposeful, possessed
complete in themselves
not wanting
Anyone Else
come apart from the mainstream
where the air is clear
in the heavenly places
life is so much simpler
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mamta
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| Posted: Thu Feb 12 3:02:30 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: GOD IS |
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I liked this very much lorraine. Its so true - the second stanza. Did you cap 'anyone' last line of stanza 2 purposely?
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| Posted: Thu Feb 26 13:30:14 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: GOD IS |
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Very good lorraine. Nice subtle message intwined in your words. Mainstream I am not. Good write!!!
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lorraine
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| Posted: Fri Feb 27 23:08:12 EST 2009 Post subject: Re: GOD IS |
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Cheers guys.
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TomZart
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| Posted: Sat Mar 14 12:35:05 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: GOD IS |
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God is my pilot too and your poem is a testimonial of your faith and gift of
being a good poet.
Tom Zart
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jjbreunig3
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13 15:13:22 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: GOD IS |
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A delightful piece; although God wants to be more than just our co-pilot; He wants us to live for Him and demonstrate His love on earth; thanks for sharing this poem. --Joe
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TomZart
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| Posted: Wed Aug 26 9:44:29 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: GOD IS |
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God will love you even more because with His help you have composed a
poem of your love of faith.Give us more
Tom Zart
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thewholesoul
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| Posted: Tue Oct 20 14:58:12 EDT 2009 Post subject: Re: GOD IS |
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lovely poem
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