Unseen Presence-by Frances Ayers

When life becomes hurried and choices are unclear,
there is an unseen Presence who will surely get us there.

We may not reach our destiny,at our chosen time
but there is someone wiser whose help we’ll always find.

He’ll give us hope to find our path,a light to guide the way.
His Strength will pull us up the hill and help us see the day.

He knows the road is rough,he’s been there long before.
At Calvary he gave his life and opened up the door.

I think this should be in the spiritual poetry forum. What are you looking for as far as feedback is concerned?

Hi Curator.Thanks for the read.I was told I can't post anymore in any forum until I have read and commented.I am fairly new,and am just learning my way around.I would like to know If my poem stands up to standards as far as a classical poem(rhyme and meter).

This is an uplifting short poem. I suggest that you fix the meter to fit L2 and the last line..iambic with 14 syllables. It would be much more readable with a graceful, constant flowing meter.

Thanks!