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Bercilak Likes the forums


  
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Posted: Sat Sep 11 2:40:28 EDT 2010 Post subject: Writing |
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Guys, I hope you like this one by the Welsh poet, R S Thomas. It says a lot about the writing process; it talks about why poetry matters.
Poetry for Breakfast
'Listen, now, verse should be as natural
As the small tuber that feeds on muck
And grows slowly from obtuse soil
To the white flower of immortal beauty.'
'Natural, hell! What was it Chaucer
Said once about the long toil
That goes like blood to the poem's making?
Leave it to nature and the verse sprawls,
Limp as bindweed, if it break at all
Life's iron crust. Man, you must sweat
And rhyme your guts taut, if you'd build
Your verse a ladder.'
'You speak as though
No sunlight ever surprised the mind
Groping on its cloudy path.'
'Sunlight's a thing that needs a window
Before it enters a dark room.
Windows don't happen.'
So two old poets,
Hunched at their beer in the low haze
Of an inn parlour, while the talk ran
Noisily by them, glib with prose.
_________________ For wonder of his hwe men hade,
Set in his semblaunt sene;
He ferde as freke were fade,
And oueral enker-grene.
'Sir Gawayn and Ƿe Grene Knyȝt' Passus 1 |
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cathy.robinson Has written an Occasional poem or two.


  
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wordsmithwannabe "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


                   
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Posted: Mon Sep 13 12:33:28 EDT 2010 Post subject: Re: Writing |
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i frequently engage in poetry discussions with myself. it's especially embarrassing when it's out loud. and in public. please tell me i'm not the only one who does this...
_________________ i really really really hate repetitious redundancy. |
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Tony "I'm not mad. I'm just PISSED OFF!"


  
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Posted: Mon Sep 13 12:48:39 EDT 2010 Post subject: Re: Writing |
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Great poem, and right on the money.
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