Dementia

questionajourney

Mental jenga
compulsive hands
shivers through
her thought process.
Innards tangled
steadiness demands
a thorough
internalized hypothesis.

wylde

questionajourney - im enjoying reading you.

for what its worth, id sugest "processes" ipo "process". and "tangle" ipo "tangled". minor nits, personal preferences.

rite on.

Deleted_User_9824 · Member for Life Joined: Jan 02, 2010 Posts: 358 Credits: 0

Wow! Liked!

Luved all the lines ESP
mental jenga

trying to connect with the
final word hypothesis,
I can't seem to do better,
ignore my rambling
it's great.

questionajourney

thank you wylde, and i do appreciate your suggestions.

questionajourney

Ilan thank you for the time...i guess "hypothesis" was just my way of hinting that any inner sanity may be relative, or perceptual at its core...i agree it may be too ambiguous....don't want to mess with the reader too much, heheh.