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PostPosted: Wed Jul 6 23:15:41 EDT 2011    Post subject: 2 Whom I Love Reply with quote

I wake up and the first thing I do is say “Good morning” to her.
I ask how her day went and what is on her agenda today.
I tell her how my day went and what I have planned for today.
I love calling her “beautiful” and “gorgeous”.
I tell her “I miss you” even when it has only been five minutes since we last talked.
I enjoy every text message from her.
I smile and blush with every thought of her.
I love every picture of her.
I never tell her goodbye because I don’t like being away.
I say a prayer for her before going to sleep.
Then I lay next to you and wish you were her.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 7 3:09:15 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: 2 Whom I Love Reply with quote

ouch. it was worse than hallmark.


until the last line lol

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 8 2:45:03 EDT 2011    Post subject: Re: 2 Whom I Love Reply with quote

Honest and lovely
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 30 4:31:57 EDT 2012    Post subject: Re: 2 Whom I Love Reply with quote

interesting piece. the best line was the last one. i actually think that's how you should start the poem off. it would make for a better read and people would understand the poem better.

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