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redheadedslxt The first hundred years are the hardest


  
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Posted: Sun Mar 5 0:27:58 EST 2006 Post subject: Write a Tanka |
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A tanka is a Japanese syllabic form, composed of 5 lines and arranged into a tercet (3 line stanza), followed by a break and then the final couplet. Here is what it would look like, note the syllable count in each line:
line syllables
1. xxxxx (5)
2. xxxxxxx (7)
3. xxxxx (5)
4. xxxxxxx (7)
5. xxxxxxx (7)
If you like the form you can keep going, repeating it. This is called a linked tanka.
If you were creating a linked tanka by exchanging the poem/adding tankas with a fellow poet, this would be called a renga--very fun! A fun collaboration, try it!.
A helpful writing tip: select a book or other printed matter at random from your surroundings. Steal language from it (a word, phrase)--or merely respond to it.
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flyruga87 Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Wed Feb 16 20:53:01 EST 2011 Post subject: Re: Write a Tanka |
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Eating the right foods
Leads to being healthy and fit
Eating the wrong foods leads
To a unhealthy and unfit
body so eat the right foods
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flyruga87 Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Wed Feb 16 20:53:38 EST 2011 Post subject: Re: Write a Tanka |
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Eating the right foods
Leads to being healthy and fit
Eating the wrong foods leads
To a unhealthy and unfit
body so eat the right foods
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butterflyzrfree Told love the world was on fire


   
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Posted: Sun Feb 26 19:23:10 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Write a Tanka |
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This is my favorite japanese form. It allows for a bit more depth than the other.
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Posted: Wed Mar 7 1:03:36 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Write a Tanka |
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I haven't encountered this form before. Are there any other criteria apart from syllable count? E.g. subject matter, immediacy of imagery as with haiku? (I note that the first 3 lines could amount to a haiku).
Anyway, here's an attempt:
stepping through hot sand
I follow in your footsteps
keeping our rhythm
it's not because I love you -
but your footsteps are charming...
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Posted: Wed Mar 7 10:44:33 EST 2012 Post subject: Re: Write a Tanka |
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sharp and broken words
bleed, to gush out as poem
-talus of my heart
crashing at the shore, in vain
attempt to knock at your heart
"Talus" - I had to look it up... a new word for my vocab! Good work, Deepali.
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