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 Posted: Fri Apr 6 8:24:36 EDT 2012 Post subject: Real |
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The earth will spin and pull,
the sun is always out,
the moon is ever full-
the stars? I harbor doubt..
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| Posted: Sun Apr 8 11:46:27 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Real |
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In the permanent section, under the title "Actual"..
The earth will spin and pull,
the sun is always out,
the moon is ever full-
The stars? I suffer doubt.
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| Posted: Mon Apr 9 3:53:35 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Real |
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"I hold my doubt"?
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| Posted: Mon Apr 9 11:48:00 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Real |
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Hey guys..thanks for the input.
I considered "hold" but I thought it may upset the meter a bit. And I like "suffer" because it could mean bearing pain, or entertaining a notion.
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