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Summer Aubade (For NJ)
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fogglethorpe Who knew we would get this far?


                 
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Posted: Tue May 22 15:18:54 EDT 2012 Post subject: Summer Aubade (For NJ) |
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Greetings Summer, welcome home;
where, in Autumn, did you roam?
Seeking boardwalks, sand, and foam?
Some new ocean's spray?
Greetings Summer, welcome sun;
where, in Winter, did you run?
Were you with the ockqutchaun
sleeping months away?
Greetings Summer, welcome back-
Spring had barely time to pack;
Fall will amble down the track
one September day.
Copyright © 2012 by Hugh Lemma- All rights reserved
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fogglethorpe Who knew we would get this far?


                 
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Posted: Tue May 22 23:59:13 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Summer Aubade (For NJ) |
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I'm glad. Thank you.
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Posted: Wed May 23 23:53:05 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Summer Aubade (For NJ) |
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Enjoyed this much. Very clever.
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Posted: Thu May 24 2:05:30 EDT 2012 Post subject: Re: Summer Aubade (For NJ) |
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Hi 3ring. It's good to see you. And thanks for the positive response.
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