sorry every one, I know this one will be very sad, but its to make us feel and care of our Friends who have cancer.
also to show those people, that hope is important.




*Cancer*

Cancer...
that beast that entered my life
and destroyed every thing I had..
my joy, my smile, my life.

I cant go to school any more
I'm a prisoner in my dark room
and when they want to tour me
they take me to the hospital

all my friends left me..
most of my relatives forgot me..
because I have cancer..
every one fear it.

its part of me
I cant get rid of him
and he don't want to lose me.

I wish my tears are the cure
because I cry every day
my pain is spiritual,
more than physical...
because I'm alone
even mom cant hug me

I know.. I know..
its a matter of time to leave this world..
and when that time comes
I know.. they will forget me

my Doctor said " hope is your only cure..
be strong... god with you "

he remind me of an old view I saw..
a red flower stand against the wind force
it survived, and that made me happy.

I wish I can do the same, its hard,
god be with me.
as long as I breath in this world...
I will fight...
god help me.




P.S. this is my sister's friend,, she has cancer so I wrote this not just for her but for all people who suffer from this beast

Did your sisters friend read it?

i like the idea of pain being spiritual. my mom has cancer and sometimes i wonder about that.

I hope she can read it.
Still I didnt hear any news about her.
god bless her.

I love this, i do see some things that may need to be corrected because it seems that the flow is disturbed when the tense does not read right. but other then that i absolutely think that this peom is very inspirational.
"and he don't want to lose me."
should this be "does not"? along with this tense i can see more that may need to be corrected.

Thanks, your right.
ill have a focused look,
thanks again.