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#1: flat lining as a coping mechanism Author: wylde, Location: between my ears. all.ways

Posted: Fri Jun 10 5:23:16 EDT 2011
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flat lining as a coping mechanism

its unplugged weave threads through needles
pinless pricks
eyes numb detachment

retina skewers uopon nothing
flatter than a dead mans finger
felt on another epistles existless hand
stroking emptied space

drainless in a blanched veritable
table of sodden misgiving
giving rise
to no pulse
its safety matches
strikes in a glass bubble
airless to suffocated flame
inert
unruptured by demonised daemons
or
guts
spilled entrails of whisperers coo cooing
like a revolver glove
contained
in and by nothing

and everything

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#2: Re: flat lining as a coping mechanism Author: fogglethorpe, Location: Sonoran Desert

Posted: Tue Jun 14 13:24:06 EDT 2011
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I can't comment on the content, because it eludes me. The language is interesting though.

S3..missing apostrophes on possesive nouns "mans' and "epistles"..but maybe that's by design, as this is very minimalist.

#3: Re: flat lining as a coping mechanism Author: wylde, Location: between my ears. all.ways

Posted: Mon Jun 20 4:34:24 EDT 2011
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hugh - if the language engaged you, i will settle for that. just a take at be.ing.

and yeah, punctuation kept to the barest minimum.

thanks for your input.

#4: Re: flat lining as a coping mechanism Author: induce,

Posted: Mon Jun 20 10:14:25 EDT 2011
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wylde wrote:

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flat lining as a coping mechanism

its unplugged weave threads through needles
pinless pricks
eyes numb detachment

retina skewers uopon nothing
flatter than a dead mans finger
felt on another epistles existless hand
stroking emptied space

drainless in a blanched veritable
table of sodden misgiving
giving rise
to no pulse
its safety matches
strikes in a glass bubble
airless to suffocated flame
inert
unruptured by demonised daemons
or
guts
spilled entrails of whisperers coo cooing
like a revolver glove
contained
in and by nothing

and everything

.

Wylde the revolver and I pictured blacked black revolover glove, took the
scene and danced with a Queen. I is he cetre of he equaion

mae i am sorry i's afer 1 his keyboard is sickin, sorry mae. ery frusraingg. sorry.

#5: Re: flat lining as a coping mechanism Author: wylde, Location: between my ears. all.ways

Posted: Tue Jun 21 2:50:01 EDT 2011
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