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Week 4, March 4 to March 11. FRUITS or VEGETABLES.
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natey The Chief Troublemaker


 
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Posted: Fri Mar 4 10:59:42 EST 2005 Post subject: Week 4, March 4 to March 11. FRUITS or VEGETABLES. |
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Congratulations to lowly, with a score of 33% is this week's winner!
Thanks as always to everyone for participating, and for all the votes!!!
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lowly Has the Poetry Bug


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Posted: Fri Mar 4 20:11:03 EST 2005 Post subject: Re: Week 4, March 4 to March 11. "Fruits or Vegetables |
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While Slicing Onions
(for caroline t-c)
while slicing onions
i vividly remember
the night you let me
take a fresh blade
and dull it on
your back
carving icons of
every religion I could think of
overlapping
crisscrossing
washing over them
with searing traces of flames
drawing up rivulets
of red salty venom
i was sure would
corrode the blade
corrupt its edge
i remember how you
described the sting
of showering
days afterward
with such obscene pride
as if bearing my cross
were your delight
your ambition
your happy undoing
when all I secretly wanted
was to cut away desire
to sever some corporeal ties
to trim away the guilt
of knowing that very soon
i would have to cut you loose
5/7/00
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DainBrammage I might even come back next week!


Joined: Feb 09, 2004 Posts: 16 Credits: 1 Location: Albany, NY

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Posted: Tue Mar 8 16:15:53 EST 2005 Post subject: Re: Week 4, March 4 to March 11. FRUITS or VEGETABLES. |
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Of fruits or vegetables
I prefer the first
Fruits flit
Vegetables sit, silent
Fruits are colorful, flamboyant
Vegetables are dull
Fruits have a twinkle in their overshadowed eyes
Vegetables have dark circles around their shiftless stares
I could go on and on
But the facts would not change
Vegetables have lost their personality
While a fruits are ever changing
Vegetables make for good furniture
Fruits are often the life of the party
Plain and simple, Fruits are fun
Dain Brammage,
Well, what did you expect?
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natey The Chief Troublemaker


 
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Posted: Wed Mar 9 18:09:24 EST 2005 Post subject: Re: Week 4, March 4 to March 11. FRUITS or VEGETABLES. |
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This is a poem by cmark entitled
"Running circles around 'THE MAN'"
fruits or vegetables
its hard to choose between the two
i'd eat fruit in the morning
but I couldnt eat brocolli at 9 am
I'd eat it after my waffles
but those are my midnight snack
so i guess I don't have to choose now do i?
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LoSt And for a moment, it was like joy was


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Posted: Wed Mar 9 23:52:35 EST 2005 Post subject: Re: Week 4, March 4 to March 11. FRUITS or VEGETABLES. |
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Love could easily be described as fruits and vegetables,
Theres some that we like and some that we cant stand,
Just like theres some things about you that make me smile,
And then theres those things that annoy me about you,
But we have always been told we have to eat our fruits and vegetables to be healthy,
Just like we have to love to be healthy,
We may go on strike and refuse to eat our fruits or veggies,
But one day we will eat them again,
It is inevitable,
We cannot escape love,
And as we grow older,
Those fruits and veggies that we may not have liked before,
Change to be of our liking,
The same applies to love,
Some of those things that annoy me about you,
Eventually grow on me,
And when your gone I miss them,
And I am desperate without them,
Because I need my fruits and veggies,
Just like I need to feel loved,
And it may not be the best thing in life,
But like my parents always said,
Thats just the way it is,
Dont ask why...
_________________ I love deadlines. I like the wooshing sound they make as they fly by.
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jessaroo And for a moment, it was like joy was


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Posted: Thu Mar 10 0:21:13 EST 2005 Post subject: Re: Week 4, March 4 to March 11. FRUITS or VEGETABLES. |
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your hair
is like peach fuzz
soft and light
your eyes
like blueberries
only paler
and more delicious
your lips
are like ripe strawberries
juicy and sensual
your skin
like a banana
and your clothes
are like the peel
[i wish to peel them off and unveal that glorious banana skin]
your nose
is like a cherry
i'd love to nibble on it
your hands
like apples
rough on the outside
but irresistable
you
are like a bunch of grapes
hanging on a vine of lust
i wish to pick you off
and slide you onto my tongue
lovingly
you are the fruit bowl
of my desire
_________________ i wish we could open our eyes
to see in all directions at the same time
oh what a beautiful view
if you were never aware
of what was around you
and it is true what you said
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djmcginn Newbie


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Posted: Thu Mar 10 9:44:48 EST 2005 Post subject: Re: Week 4, March 4 to March 11. FRUITS or VEGETABLES. |
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Hamburger
i’ll have mine with a soft drink
sweet nectar of hard candy
abrupt with the sighing of bubbles
give me potatoes stripped of skin
damp, eyeless
cut into dollhouse four by fours
broken up like a home
and tossed into boiling oil
may i also please
have my meat peeking out the sides
bulging like love handles
and a flying saucer made of bread
that’s what i want the top to look like
like it landed there, a little off center
i want catsup bled on white bread
i love the way mustard coagulates
with grease and soaks
into the bottom half of the bun
i like onion chopped into tiny bits
sharp edged like shards of glass
or perfect icebergs poking up
from mayonnaise
give me lettuce
lettuce being to wimpy
what spinach was to popeye
make mine with lettuce
and tomato like a red pumpkin earth
but i want my tomato sliced
until it looks like a wheel
flopped on its side and brimming with seeds
yes
and thank you for asking
i would like some american cheese on that
because i’m an american
and hamburger is american food
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