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redheadedslxt
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NikeAGoGo
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JPerry1980
Wrote Lyric Verse at least once.
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NikeAGoGo
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JPerry1980
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kylebank
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I know I have put to much thought into this, but the actor in me just couldn't leave this alone. It's like a great script of a small moment. Imagine, if you will, the following scene:
. (peering forward in the darkness)
.. (backing up in disbelief)
... (looks side to side to see if anyone else is watching)
! ~ GASP!
. (exhale)
%$*& "bull sh*t"
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NikeAGoGo
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I know I have put to much thought into this, but the actor in me just couldn't leave this alone. It's like a great script of a small moment. Imagine, if you will, the following scene:
. (peering forward in the darkness)
.. (backing up in disbelief)
... (looks side to side to see if anyone else is watching)
! ~ GASP!
. (exhale)
%$*& "bull sh*t"
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