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PostPosted: Thu Feb 16 14:17:28 EST 2012    Post subject: Jumping Genes Reply with quote

My hands are frozen again
It’s a habit that I have yet to grow accustomed to
I try not think about it- 
Yet this tingle rip my pours as I lay down 
Reflecting over the history of baby breath, old hand and an apple that reached out 
and caused The Fates
 to cut strings, 
into chaos. 
 
My senescence is the cause of   
                               
J<sup>um</sup> Ping G<sup>e</sup>n <sup>e</sup> s Like a grandfather clock It knows me all to well Custom made with the craziness of my world tears to smiles Pleasure to pain Sometimes are one and the same And why it is that when you laugh The world becomes warm And I sink deeply into my coded skin While my toes tingle restlessly To a pale faced moon. Are we Feeling robots Out reached and stretching beyond our fathers? Does God J<sup>um</sup>p as we? Or is it simply the cause of mechanics. Some ask how a scientist can believe in God, I believe science is a simple measure of God’s language As it j <sup>um</sup>ps from one paradox to the next.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 16 14:43:22 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Jumping Genes Reply with quote

Well I tried subscript in HTML and that failed so that is the first thing i need to figure out. I also tried <SPAN style="vertical-align:super"> that didn't work.
if anyone can help me with how to subscript it would be amazing!

Secondly, this is about the new scientific discovering how personality formation as it relates to our genetics (all related to epigenetics..i.e. jumping genes.
The reason why I want the subscripts is of course because it ties into mathematics and the I like the whole zen Buddhist ties with UM (Aum) but also to the pauses in speech which kinda mimic the way the genes jump...again this might be a far stretch for some so I want to know if this is out reaching... to the exponent e (often called the natural exponent and one of the more important functions in math)...which is in Jumping and Genes.

The reason for all of this is that I wanted to write something entertaining, thoughtful, and existential in nature while combining my thoughts on God, science and the self. I know..big task for a small space and I have always been overly ambiguous. Any thoughts on this will be greatly appreciated.

Oh and just for clarifications

The lines..are meant to read as

My senescence is the cause of

Jumping Genes (with "um" and the two "e" 's written in subscripts)

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 17 22:15:10 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Jumping Genes Reply with quote

Lyla, I am quite taken with this poem, most especially this -

Reflecting over the history of baby breath, old hand and an apple that reached out
and caused The Fates
to cut strings,
into chaos.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18 0:29:22 EST 2012    Post subject: Re: Jumping Genes Reply with quote

Thank you. its a hard one to write..mostly because epigenetics is not particularly a sexy topic..but I'm happy you enjoyed it Smile

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