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Starved and screamed and ate mad dogs


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11 2:59:39 EST 2006    Post subject: no smoke Reply with quote

I quit smoking so it's been longer than what says for cigarette...inhalation...i make no sense..



i type away
at my own little piece
of mechanical humanity.
i think of what came before
from the cro mags
to the electric typewriter
that came
before our electric
machine guns.
i haven't had
a cigarette
in two days
and im thinking
of all the writers'
words of wisdom
and how
even i have sold out
but
at least i have
talent.

artists
are only afraid
of not being
called
artists.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11 3:08:17 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

good stuff

like i told you before, i quit several times but always ended up where i was before, so power to you!!

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i think of what came before
from the cro mags
to the electric typewriter
that came
before our electric
machine guns.
i haven't had
a cigarette
in two days

i loved those lines!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11 3:09:17 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

Well thank you very much!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11 3:12:37 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

I liked it. I did. I also liked the fact that you haven't smoked in two days. I'm proud.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11 3:19:10 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

thanks you guys

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11 22:47:08 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

I'm rooting for ya.... And, for some reason, it doesn't look like I spelled rooting right.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:22:00 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

NEdaynow: You have to spell it like it sounds: rootin' for ya... See, better.

I like this one, very melancholy feeling, especially the last stanza. How's the quitting going?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:23:31 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

it's been awhile since a smoke!

Now I love chewing gum Very Happy

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:33:04 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

...make sure to brush those pearly whites and expect to gain a few punds... happened to me Smile
- got cavities and man boobies first time i quit Very Happy

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:39:38 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

already have a cavity and man boobs!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:45:34 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!! post some hot man boobie pictures!!!...heh... i mean NO!!! NO don't do that... bad fingers... baaaaad fingers... no more typie typie....

i still like this poem alot and give you credit for your sufferings it is hard to kickfor most-and i praise you on your actions!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:46:27 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

that first day...I wanted to punch EVERYONE in the head.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:48:21 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

if ever we should cross paths, you're welcome to punch me, i would take it as a gesture of welcoming and "a hello to you" ... Smile

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:49:42 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

NAW I'd probably give you handshake and a big warm goofy smile, I do that to everyone, punching in the head is now reserved for those that would mess with us

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:52:40 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

maybe i am shallow or have just noticed it, but the c-masterprime signature is awesome Very Happy

and i as well would shake your hand fello sir of hunterism

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 2:54:04 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

yeah someone gave me the title so I decided to use it as my sig Very Happy

I THINK I WANNA WATCH THAT CONAN CLIP AGAIN

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 3:01:20 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

hahahahaha i love that... i could swear he was on connan earlier than 03 and he almost knocked himself silly trying to climb over furniture... maybe i'm thinking of a different interview/ appearance???
- anywho... yes... that is the best connan segment ever... i love when he randomly freaks out and connan reminds everyone that he was holding an automatic weapon a few minutes ago.... yeah.. johnny depp is unbeatable as a hunter impersonator...by the way fellow hunterologist, the rum diaries is in the talks as a movie and possibly in the works at this point- and guess who, yet again, shall play the good doctor... KICK ASSS!!!!

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 3:05:40 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

Humanicide wrote:
hahahahaha i love that... i could swear he was on connan earlier than 03 and he almost knocked himself silly trying to climb over furniture... maybe i'm thinking of a different interview/ appearance???
- anywho... yes... that is the best connan segment ever... i love when he randomly freaks out and connan reminds everyone that he was holding an automatic weapon a few minutes ago.... yeah.. johnny depp is unbeatable as a hunter impersonator...by the way fellow hunterologist, the rum diaries is in the talks as a movie and possibly in the works at this point- and guess who, yet again, shall play the good doctor... KICK ASSS!!!!
*DANCES LIKE A GIDDY SCHOOL GIRL*

and yeah lol that could've been a different show. if so WE MUST FIND EET!

I saw Where The Buffalo Roam...not as good as FLILV but for that night, it was alright, Murray played him a little too crazy maybe?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 3:20:57 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

yeah, bill didn't quite capture that full nasilly mumble that hunter has either. but it was still pretty damn sweet!

i could swear he was falling all over the place... do you have FLILV on dvd criterion edition?? i will have to watch that tomorrow and see if it is in the spec. feat. on that one... cuz i could swear i saw him falling over furniture and mumble grunting to himslef about pig fuckers while stumbling...?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 3:22:02 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

no I don't have the movie, but I've seen the criterion and almost felt like stealing it

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 3:30:02 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

hahahahaha... its a hefty price for the film in criterion - about 35 bucks i think... but.... now that you won the book which costs about 12 bucks and the movie costs between 15 - 20 bucks... if you buy the movie in criterion... its almost like you bought the book and movie in the same day??? if you check e-bay, you might be able to get away with a steal for about $20?? keep your eyes on the prize c master prime

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 12 3:31:21 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

my prize right now is bed, bro.
I think I'm gonna hit the hay.
Have a good day!

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17 0:46:36 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

have you had a cig yet, or are ya still going strong?

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17 1:40:20 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

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have you had a cig yet, or are ya still going strong?
I ALMOST slipped, and then my dad had some stuff that he tried to help him quit and I've been using that

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17 21:20:18 EST 2006    Post subject: Re: no smoke Reply with quote

Re: manboobs. they are hot right now but only if you wax. nobody likes hairy boobs on anyone.

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