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lowly
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30 12:39:55 EDT 2004    Post subject: mc saltine Reply with quote

they call me mc saltine
thin white & delicate
not as cool as ice
but pale as snow white's new petticoat
listen up i know it's tuesday
cos my underwear tells me so
it's stained with my weak seed
seed that i could never sew
so shallow halle berri
doesn't even appeal to me
i'd rather get with janine gerafalo than j-lo
for symetry
yes, that's what it means
to roll my speed
fuck the 'belve, fuck the 'cris
pass the rolling rock
i'm bout to get pissed
as my home team loses
it's 85th consecutive world championship
spend a half an hour taking all the seeds out
finish a pinner in two hits and cough the brown cloud out
so pack up your argyles son, cos we're on a mission
if only my moms would only give up the keys to the ingnition
they call me mc saltine
thin white & delicate
four sides square
lightly salted
for the hell of it
not as cool as ice
but pale as snow white's new petticoat
i put myself to bed
re-running murder she wrote
re-running murder she wrote
...looking for one last quote[/i]

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And for a moment, it was like joy was



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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30 13:14:23 EDT 2004    Post subject: Re: mc saltine Reply with quote

That was AWESOME. I loved the rhythm and rhymes.

Loved that. Keep it up.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30 13:46:15 EDT 2004    Post subject: Re: mc saltine Reply with quote

I totally agree with jessaroo. YOur rhymes were nice.

Write another poem Lowly. I want to read another one.
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