| Order | Title | Comment | Date | Rating | | Reads | Comments |
01 | |  A fun and amusing write, with a most amicable ending! | 2013-06-19 09:35:33 | 1 |  | 39 | 4 |
02 | |  Thanks very much indeed! | 2013-06-19 09:32:20 | 1 |  | 20 | 2 |
03 | |  And sometimes that pitiful word-searcher lays the pen down but the desire lingers, and one day?…Jack | 2013-06-19 09:02:49 | 1 |  | 43 | 4 |
04 | |  The poem is fine but not the wine
Like the nut that wrote the lines
Of this vintage poem “peanutbutter wine” 8O :roll: | 2013-06-19 08:49:55 | 1 |  | 13 | 1 |
05 | |  Loved the whole poem but the fourth stanza was just outstanding, this is a fantastic peace of writing. Your mind was working right on this one…Jack :wink: | 2013-06-19 08:27:14 | 1 |  | 62 | 4 |
06 | |  The ravens rest upon the wall…caw, caw, caw
And their shadows said nothing, nothing at all | 2013-06-19 08:12:41 | 1 |  | 30 | 3 |
07 | |  hi . thanks . i am sure of the link . it is a sex magic ritual . even a basket ball court is a sex ritual as id the baseball . too . | 2013-06-19 08:08:53 | 1 |  | 61 | 2 |
08 | |  Dear Hasmukhbhai, “……………………………………………… Some attention to his words He was still in readiness to use sword I smiled at him with no more comment” It needs great courage to smile when someone has a sword in his hand. You seem to have developed this quality in your personality during your service in the Air Force. Nice poem. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Jun 19, 2013 | 2013-06-19 08:05:41 | 1 |  | 13 | 1 |
09 | |  Jesus said,'What is eaten is not venomous but what is going out(words).Prphet Mohammad said,I shal guarantee heaven if you keep two bone less piece of flesh(organs):tongue and penis.i.e. beware/control of words and control sex..Anger distroyall,says Bhagavat Gita,"Krodhat bhavati sammoha/sammohat smruti vibhrama/smruti bhramshaaat buddhi naso/Buddhi nashat pranasyashyati"Gita,2:63.Anger destroys rational thinking and causes catastrophy in life.So be cool.Nice poem , Sir. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Jun 19, 2013 | 2013-06-19 08:05:22 | 1 | | | |
10 | |  Date & Time: 6/18/2013 10:22:00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 35470533 - Humanly relation Member: Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi Comment: welcome back.. You are recharged to bounce with words..Good day to you, Brother.. | 2013-06-19 08:04:51 | 1 | | | |
11 | |  Very beautiful, Tasha! | 2013-06-19 07:21:37 | 1 |  | 64 | 9 |
12 | |  That smile on your face says it all, and I am pleased with the outcome…Jack | 2013-06-19 07:18:54 | 1 |  | 48 | 3 |
13 | |  It's a pretty familiar poem. I can say the same thing about my pillow...kind of sad. | 2013-06-19 06:40:36 | 1 |  | 37 | 3 |
14 | |  Tells a warm story in a few words. | 2013-06-19 06:38:36 | 1 | | | |
15 | |  I like the quaint old language of this. | 2013-06-19 06:36:38 | 1 |  | 27 | 1 |
16 | |  Post
Great
Kameron Diaz6 hours ago
I love how your words flow keep writing | 2013-06-19 06:36:09 | 1 |  | 6 | 1 |
17 | |  Nice! | 2013-06-19 06:35:07 | 1 |  | 48 | 3 |
18 | |  kind Reava Nuecome15 minutes ago very nice
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somanathan Iyer(6/18/2013 12:04:00 PM) great thinking! great expressions. Thank you.
Hafiza.mehwish tariq11 hours ago BUT ON THE WHOLE GOOD
Jeremy Carsey11 hours ago I thought it was thoughtful and full of emotion, heart. Comment +1 SOME SPELLING MISTAKES | 2013-06-19 06:26:03 | 1 |  | 13 | 1 |
19 | |  kudos ! huffy hunter9 hours ago thanks for such a soulful poem ..deserves the stars . Comment +1 Something people lack, sincere gratitude | 2013-06-19 06:24:58 | 1 | | | |
20 | |  j munashemumbama@poetfreak
All writers are important for sure and well written | 2013-06-19 06:24:27 | 1 | | | |
21 | |  leafsailor
I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking , you are a dear friend of mine also!!! thank you | 2013-06-19 06:24:07 | 1 | | | |
22 | |  Some Girl
A lovely poem of thanks - reminding us to be grateful for the little things, which are also the most important :) | 2013-06-19 06:23:43 | 1 | | | |
23 | |  I see your point! | 2013-06-19 04:13:23 | 1 |  | 18 | 2 |
24 | |  Pujakins, just beautiful. karen | 2013-06-19 03:25:25 | 1 |  | 64 | 9 |
25 | |  Thanks D. | 2013-06-19 03:13:52 | 1 |  | 38 | 2 |
26 | |  YOU ARE WELCOME... MY FRIEND... LOVE YOU.... HUGS. | 2013-06-19 03:07:03 | 1 |  | 103 | 3 |
27 | |  induce... i like this.... kare | 2013-06-19 03:00:46 | 1 |  | 59 | 3 |
28 | |  Very descriptive.I am however used to writing classical haiku,5,7.5 or classical tanka.Like your style. | 2013-06-19 02:15:32 | 1 |  | 64 | 9 |
29 | |  Thank you. I don't think it's really sad but more neutral. I was feeling okay when I wrote this. Some of these concepts are just things branched out by mankind, trying to find 'answers' to some of life's (unsolvable) questions. | 2013-06-19 02:14:58 | 1 |  | 18 | 2 |
30 | |  Beautiful yet sad! | 2013-06-19 02:10:30 | 1 | | | |
31 | |  Swanking, that is SWEET! enjoyed karen | 2013-06-19 01:53:09 | 1 |  | 84 | 3 |
32 | |  Yeah, this is a thoughtful piece of work.
I love it too! | 2013-06-19 00:23:00 | 1 |  | 62 | 4 |
33 | |  This is a very beautiful piece of work. Though there is a bit of [i]color[/i] in the soul of a writer, there is also something rather [i]pitiful[/i] in the soul of writer, especially when hurt. You tell a story throughout this piece... good good good. | 2013-06-19 00:20:32 | 1 |  | 43 | 4 |
34 | |  Thank you, kindly, Tasha. I appreciate your encouragement and words . They inspire me to keep writing. | 2013-06-18 23:23:21 | 1 |  | 122 | 5 |
35 | |  I am overwhelmed with gratitude for all the kind comments that have been iven here. Many thanks one and all for your generous words. It is something so true, I guess we all just resonate to it. Funny thing is, they are pernicious if they get in your garden! Weeds are such a blessing. Thanks to all. Warmly, Tasha
PS I will return the favor as time permits. | 2013-06-18 23:18:46 | 1 |  | 64 | 9 |