Oh my, Boris, wonderful. Last week? It was eerie, uncanny. Enjoyed this, Mary Ann

 Oh Gabrielle, so expressive and so very well done. For me, missing someone since May 26th-hits very close to home. Thankfully I'll visit him in hospital on 9/1. Thank you for this. Mary Ann PS: If you don't mind, please read my "The Call"....

 Intense stuff man. Really liked it. The flow is quite interesting. Keep up the good work bro!

 Oh Jahnvi, wonderful, and one of my favorite picturesque subjects, guardians of sailors and their craft. Smiles, Mary Ann

 Wonderful, John, an emotional technicolor saga so well written. Tolkeinesque....my favorites. Mary Ann

 Beautiful sentiment, Islandgirl, such a wonderful tribute. Would that we all could experience such a union and be patient enough to achieve success. I should have visited your poems before. Enjoyed this so very much, Mary Ann

 Very well written and with such a sweet and genuine care. This was a good write and I am sure that one person would take it to heart if they knew. -Melis

 Simple and to the point. A good one. Try to be a little more descriptive with your feelings though. Just an advice. Words have an amazing way of carrying away the reader to that place you're emerging from. But an impressive effort! Keep at it temptress!:)

 I give this a 10 higher if I could. A friend and lover are hard to find. Married or not.

 Fabulous eye on the 1990 streets , and the rhyme moves with a hip kick althroughout the piece. Again I'd lose the first word caps.

 Succinct and sinuous little piece on one of my favorite cities. I'd lose the first word caps; they distract. S4,L2 &L3 are memorable. L.

 A nice song....

 i love you john. you are truely amazing and incredibly talented. this poem, [along with the others] mean the world to me and have a special place forever in my heart right with you.

 Very good write, I love this one. You are very wonderful person and I'm Sure Mr. Right is out there so keep your head up and saying so long to Mr. Right now xoxo

 Great opening and ending lines

 You win, yeah I know 'it’s not a contest' but I can’t top this.

 To put this situation it into words like this, is art Enjoyed . Seen me in this piece.......

 Let me get on the bandwagon here one great read.....

 i'll be honest with you T...i found parts of this amusing..then as it went on..the humor went away..and i started to feel your plea and explanation of lonliness..though i'm still smiling with this..it is a game..and a natural reaction to being phucked with, is to phuck em right back..so i don't get an overwhelming sense of malice on your part..to me this was a great transitional poem from beginning to end..'mixed up' and 'phuck' had me grinning and then the mood became more of an emotional soak..which i thought was a cool way to deliver humor and feeling...you know sometimes you just read a poem that you can't help but read a bit further into..love it..this is just my reflection:) i'll say it with ya SO LONG SUCKER'S!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)q

 This work well for feeling, but isn't punctuated correctly. One word generally doesn't make a line. L.

 ok--this works. L.

 I didn't understand this piece as it meandered from wedding dress to fly my blackbird. First words caps confuse the issue, as well as punctuation. I think workshoping would help. L.

 Good story bones on this this poem, but it's way too long, and the linebreaks need work. L.

 This really works a a vignette with a end message. Needs caps and some linebrak changes, but provokes some feelings. L.

 Good review poem; rhyming works here. L

 Lots of heartfelt sentiment here, but I think there is a fair amount of cliché throughout. First word caps each line don't do anything for your poetry. Wonder how this would be without rhyming. L.

 Enjoyed this provocative view.

 One of the sweetest haiku's I have read so far.

 Beautiful write Tina, I just love reading your poems they are so romantic.

 Simply Beautiful, Melly. As always.

 I enjoyed this poem very much. Very nice images and wonderful message. Good work.

 it's a pity some people dont see it as an awesome strength in leaving and starting again ... including those who are doing it. well written =)

 Ruthless, grrlfriend....lol..but I guess that's how you have to be with those nuts out there.... (not saying there aren't nice guys out there tho..) Island...

 Wonderful piece and as long as you have Faith anything is possible.

 Wonderful write.