A fun and amusing write, with a most amicable ending!
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Thanks very much indeed!
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And sometimes that pitiful word-searcher lays the pen down but the desire lingers, and one day?…Jack
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The poem is fine but not the wine
Like the nut that wrote the lines
Of this vintage poem “peanutbutter wine” 8O :roll:
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Loved the whole poem but the fourth stanza was just outstanding, this is a fantastic peace of writing. Your mind was working right on this one…Jack :wink:
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The ravens rest upon the wall…caw, caw, caw
And their shadows said nothing, nothing at all
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hi . thanks . i am sure of the link . it is a sex magic ritual . even a basket ball court is a sex ritual as id the baseball . too .
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Dear Hasmukhbhai, “……………………………………………… Some attention to his words He was still in readiness to use sword I smiled at him with no more comment” It needs great courage to smile when someone has a sword in his hand. You seem to have developed this quality in your personality during your service in the Air Force. Nice poem. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Jun 19, 2013
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Jesus said,'What is eaten is not venomous but what is going out(words).Prphet Mohammad said,I shal guarantee heaven if you keep two bone less piece of flesh(organs):tongue and penis.i.e. beware/control of words and control sex..Anger distroyall,says Bhagavat Gita,"Krodhat bhavati sammoha/sammohat smruti vibhrama/smruti bhramshaaat buddhi naso/Buddhi nashat pranasyashyati"Gita,2:63.Anger destroys rational thinking and causes catastrophy in life.So be cool.Nice poem , Sir. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Jun 19, 2013
Date & Time: 6/18/2013 10:22:00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 35470533 - Humanly relation Member: Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi Comment: welcome back.. You are recharged to bounce with words..Good day to you, Brother..
Very beautiful, Tasha!
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That smile on your face says it all, and I am pleased with the outcome…Jack
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It's a pretty familiar poem. I can say the same thing about my pillow...kind of sad.
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Tells a warm story in a few words.
I like the quaint old language of this.
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Kameron Diaz6 hours ago
I love how your words flow keep writing
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kind Reava Nuecome15 minutes ago very nice
somanathan Iyer(6/18/2013 12:04:00 PM) great thinking! great expressions. Thank you.
Hafiza.mehwish tariq11 hours ago BUT ON THE WHOLE GOOD
Jeremy Carsey11 hours ago I thought it was thoughtful and full of emotion, heart. Comment +1 SOME SPELLING MISTAKES
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kudos ! huffy hunter9 hours ago thanks for such a soulful poem ..deserves the stars . Comment +1 Something people lack, sincere gratitude
All writers are important for sure and well written
I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking , you are a dear friend of mine also!!! thank you
A lovely poem of thanks - reminding us to be grateful for the little things, which are also the most important :)
I see your point!
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Pujakins, just beautiful. karen
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YOU ARE WELCOME... MY FRIEND... LOVE YOU.... HUGS.
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induce... i like this.... kare
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Very descriptive.I am however used to writing classical haiku,5,7.5 or classical tanka.Like your style.
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Thank you. I don't think it's really sad but more neutral. I was feeling okay when I wrote this. Some of these concepts are just things branched out by mankind, trying to find 'answers' to some of life's (unsolvable) questions.
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Beautiful yet sad!
Swanking, that is SWEET! enjoyed karen
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Yeah, this is a thoughtful piece of work.
I love it too!
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This is a very beautiful piece of work. Though there is a bit of [i]color[/i] in the soul of a writer, there is also something rather [i]pitiful[/i] in the soul of writer, especially when hurt. You tell a story throughout this piece... good good good.
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Thank you, kindly, Tasha. I appreciate your encouragement and words . They inspire me to keep writing.
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I am overwhelmed with gratitude for all the kind comments that have been iven here. Many thanks one and all for your generous words. It is something so true, I guess we all just resonate to it. Funny thing is, they are pernicious if they get in your garden! Weeds are such a blessing. Thanks to all. Warmly, Tasha
PS I will return the favor as time permits.
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