A fun and amusing write, with a most amicable ending!

 Thanks very much indeed!

 And sometimes that pitiful word-searcher lays the pen down but the desire lingers, and one day?…Jack

 The poem is fine but not the wine Like the nut that wrote the lines Of this vintage poem “peanutbutter wine” 8O :roll:

 Loved the whole poem but the fourth stanza was just outstanding, this is a fantastic peace of writing. Your mind was working right on this one…Jack :wink:

 The ravens rest upon the wall…caw, caw, caw And their shadows said nothing, nothing at all

 hi . thanks . i am sure of the link . it is a sex magic ritual . even a basket ball court is a sex ritual as id the baseball . too .

 Dear Hasmukhbhai, “……………………………………………… Some attention to his words He was still in readiness to use sword I smiled at him with no more comment” It needs great courage to smile when someone has a sword in his hand. You seem to have developed this quality in your personality during your service in the Air Force. Nice poem. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Jun 19, 2013

 Jesus said,'What is eaten is not venomous but what is going out(words).Prphet Mohammad said,I shal guarantee heaven if you keep two bone less piece of flesh(organs):tongue and penis.i.e. beware/control of words and control sex..Anger distroyall,says Bhagavat Gita,"Krodhat bhavati sammoha/sammohat smruti vibhrama/smruti bhramshaaat buddhi naso/Buddhi nashat pranasyashyati"Gita,2:63.Anger destroys rational thinking and causes catastrophy in life.So be cool.Nice poem , Sir. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Jun 19, 2013

 Date & Time: 6/18/2013 10:22:00 PM Remove this comment Poem: 35470533 - Humanly relation Member: Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi Comment: welcome back.. You are recharged to bounce with words..Good day to you, Brother..

 Very beautiful, Tasha!

 That smile on your face says it all, and I am pleased with the outcome…Jack

 It's a pretty familiar poem. I can say the same thing about my pillow...kind of sad.

 Tells a warm story in a few words.

 I like the quaint old language of this.

 Post Great Kameron Diaz6 hours ago I love how your words flow keep writing

 Nice!

 kind Reava Nuecome15 minutes ago very nice u somanathan Iyer(6/18/2013 12:04:00 PM) great thinking! great expressions. Thank you. Hafiza.mehwish tariq11 hours ago BUT ON THE WHOLE GOOD Jeremy Carsey11 hours ago I thought it was thoughtful and full of emotion, heart. Comment +1 SOME SPELLING MISTAKES

 kudos ! huffy hunter9 hours ago thanks for such a soulful poem ..deserves the stars . Comment +1 Something people lack, sincere gratitude

 j munashemumbama@poetfreak All writers are important for sure and well written

 leafsailor I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking , you are a dear friend of mine also!!! thank you

 Some Girl A lovely poem of thanks - reminding us to be grateful for the little things, which are also the most important :)

 I see your point!

 Pujakins, just beautiful. karen

 Thanks D.

 YOU ARE WELCOME... MY FRIEND... LOVE YOU.... HUGS.

 induce... i like this.... kare

 Very descriptive.I am however used to writing classical haiku,5,7.5 or classical tanka.Like your style.

 Thank you. I don't think it's really sad but more neutral. I was feeling okay when I wrote this. Some of these concepts are just things branched out by mankind, trying to find 'answers' to some of life's (unsolvable) questions.

 Beautiful yet sad!

 Swanking, that is SWEET! enjoyed karen

 Yeah, this is a thoughtful piece of work. I love it too!

 This is a very beautiful piece of work. Though there is a bit of [i]color[/i] in the soul of a writer, there is also something rather [i]pitiful[/i] in the soul of writer, especially when hurt. You tell a story throughout this piece... good good good.

 Thank you, kindly, Tasha. I appreciate your encouragement and words . They inspire me to keep writing.

 I am overwhelmed with gratitude for all the kind comments that have been iven here. Many thanks one and all for your generous words. It is something so true, I guess we all just resonate to it. Funny thing is, they are pernicious if they get in your garden! Weeds are such a blessing. Thanks to all. Warmly, Tasha PS I will return the favor as time permits.