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Poems - Can Blood Shed Blood?

Can Blood Shed Blood?

by ImPure.Shawdow

Can blood be repaid by blood? And hurt by hurt?
What should I do to them? My vision is all blurred...
Can a gun shot get me back my feelings of yesterday?
Can I color up my life with the red of a dead man's blood,

Rough edges in the undertones of the music play in my mind,
I would let go the hurt if I could leave it behind,
It won't let me look at myself like I once did in your eyes,
The blood is rising up my veins and turning me blind...

Living life in grey is not what I have ever done before,
I sailed deep in the ocean... Can I bank on the shore?
I can't answer my own questions of the right thing to do...
I can't get myself back once I have shut out this door...

Blood repays blood, and hurt shall answer this hurt,
I see their faces smashed, I want to see blood spurt,
A gun shot will not get me back my feelings of yesterday,
But I will color up my life with the red of their blood...

that seem to be cold and distant from the way
my blood over flow within my veins so as blood
answer blood as it sheds tears of terror

and revenge over revenge blood is
what caused the wind in my body to leek with
ever hurtful lie you revealed to me
i wonder sometimes can blood shed blood?...

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Be careful what you (Score: 1 )
by kamille_mosberg on Friday, May 11, 2007 (16:16:25)

Be careful what you wish for, when you think on someone that strongly you yourself have been defeated. Impure the greatest revenge is success, lil sister. Nice poem........

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Be careful what you (Score: 1 )
by ImPure.Shawdow on Friday, May 11, 2007 (20:46:18)

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Great sequence of th (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Monday, August 11, 2008 (00:04:32)

Great sequence of thought, I wonder what happended to the voice to be so in need of revenge?

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