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Awareness

by vexations

Her eyes never allowed boredom
upon her heart.
Each light, every shadow
held a secret treasure,
a passionate perspective
awaiting to be unlocked and displayed.
When she shared her vision
my humbled glance
gathered in so splendid
a moment
I paused in awe.





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Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
by angels on Monday, July 25, 2011 (07:46:40)
...how beautiful it must've been to have captured that pause...

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    Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
    by vexations on Monday, July 25, 2011 (10:50:15)
    Thanks for your comment. Was written in response to a photographic display by a friend.

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Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
by jolette on Monday, July 25, 2011 (08:42:59)
this read leaves me breathless..., encore!!!

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    Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
    by vexations on Monday, July 25, 2011 (10:51:03)
    Glad you liked this short poem. Going to check out some of your work.

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Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Monday, July 25, 2011 (21:09:56)
that is a nice original write. thanks for sharing

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    Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
    by vexations on Monday, September 05, 2011 (12:10:52)
    Thanks anna9, glad you stopped by for a read

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Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, September 05, 2011 (09:36:55)
SDweeeet! You write a great love poem! Wink

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    Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
    by vexations on Monday, September 05, 2011 (12:09:15)
    Thanks you. I am so glad you liked it.

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Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
by Arsaces on Monday, October 17, 2011 (16:48:45)
Nicely written---enjoyable read. Arsaces

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    Re: Awareness (Score: 1 )
    by vexations on Tuesday, October 18, 2011 (10:47:59)
    Glad you appreciated it. Bill

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