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Poems - In dream

In dream

by jadia4708au

You were here but with difference
Simple flower not noticed hence
Grass was still up in defiance
Your beauty was coming up and at variance

The shore was calm
Adored by tall and erect palms
You were beautiful as ever
I could believe it but eyes never

I could wait for no time
Such occasion come sometimes
You did invite me to invade in dream
I ventured into with open arm

I did not know what happened then
You were hanging in my arms even
Forgetting all things around
Your love seemed so sound

It would go long way
But I fear it shouldn’t push me away
Your passion is turning me blind
As I have in you something to find

I was same this before
And wants to remain same therefore
Whether in dreams or otherwise
Let there be beautiful sunrise

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Re: In dream (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Saturday, August 06, 2011 (22:44:44)

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Posted By: - on August 6, 2011 _____________________ Whether in dreams or otherwise Let there be beautiful sunrise Dear Sir, The above lines are beautiful and optimistic! with regards, Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna Aug 06, 2011 [ Request review ]

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Posted By: - on August 6, 2011 the last two lines through light on other lines. rm shanmugam chettiarc, chennai Aug 06, 2011 ________________________________________ [ Request review ]

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Mustafa Ahmad wrote a comment on your picture. 11 hours ago sukkoon ki talaash, kisi kisi ko naseeb hota hai. very nice and lovely picture.

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Kalyanrupa Parasar nice....... 3 hours ago · Like

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Posted By: Troylato - on August 4, 2011 This poem was a beautiful sunrise. Great write! [ Request review ]

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