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Poems - rustling leaves

rustling leaves

by Upāsaka

Brisk air rustling leaves
Old man's patchwork colored robe
Sun low in blue sky

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Re: rustling leaves (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, October 27, 2011 (21:35:36)

Does the setting sun here symbolize the old man's aging and impending death?

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Re: rustling leaves (Score: 1 )
by Upāsaka on Friday, October 28, 2011 (07:37:05)

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Re: rustling leaves (Score: 1 )
by york2frisco on Friday, October 28, 2011 (01:36:20)

Nice ... I like how these images intertwine with each other. An ironic thumbnail captured. The interplay between these three lines are worthy of contemplation.

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Re: rustling leaves (Score: 1 )
by Upāsaka on Friday, October 28, 2011 (07:37:18)

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Re: rustling leaves (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Friday, October 28, 2011 (19:16:14)

L1 & L2 feel interrelated and actually suggest each other. L3 subtly stirs contemplation. Well done!

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Re: rustling leaves (Score: 1 )
by Upāsaka on Saturday, October 29, 2011 (04:44:07)

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