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Poems - I Fear the Feast
| | I Fear the Feastby Loki
Pre-exposed windows develop as presupposed shadows envelop,
With brittle glass blown to safeguard the belittled past I’ve known.
With no home in my head my mind roams with the dead.
Silvery moon run through with a blood groove;
Shattering bone and snapping muscle introduce me to this struggle.
In a cage I rage I tussle with this torment and my eyes lament.
I sew descent with this lunar consent in a principle believe of
Eventual relief, your only safe haven is an under-water reef.
In a savage hunger I become a tribal thunder striking under the skin.
I will live forever in this endeavor till’ I cut the heart out of my clever creator.
Feral feast and grin begin in clawed grip and fang tip; let the blood and pain drip.
Evil ecstasy within me lets the beast free to feed his greed.
An emerald glimmer shadow shimmer, the soul atones for Hunts-Alone;
running through the night on the chance the he just might find an fight his creator.
Tribal thunder pounding under my chest hounding me from finding rest,
how I sink in this horrid incubus with my soul the lonely witness in this
evil enterprise energized by the moon rise to my doomed eyes.
Feral feast and grin begin in clawed grip and fan tip; let the blood and pain drip.
Every ounce of sordid sin denounced, poured in a vile venom of the h e l l I’m in.
An emerald glimmer shadow shimmer, the soul atones for Hunts-Alone as I
savor the savage scent I find in flesh rent, wandering in search with a mind bent.
The creator will find finality to her immortality by the hunger of this twisted theatre.
By Anthony S. Parker
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Re: I Fear the Feast
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, December 01, 2011 (20:25:31) |
This is a beautiful piece, very dark and savvy. I wonder what the meaning is behind "h e l l?" Do you do that in order to portray the confusion behind the spaces? You have me curious.
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Re: I Fear the Feast
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, December 01, 2011 (20:28:36) |
Also, I love what you did with the sides: the last three stanzas and the "fear the feast."
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Re: I Fear the Feast
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by Loki on Thursday, December 01, 2011 (20:29:54) |
No actually haha I do that so that the word will appear and not be filtered, though I've been wondering how it might effect the read myself, yours is a good question that I myself am still pondering. I was just happy with this piece because I was able to do the beginning letters thing again ( I have to start remembering what thats called haha) Thanks Sammi  
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Re: I Fear the Feast
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, December 01, 2011 (20:31:11) |
Interesting, so it is effective. I do often times ponder, because it helps me recognize. You are welcome. I thought it was cool how you did that. 
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Re: I Fear the Feast
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by Loki on Thursday, December 01, 2011 (20:42:28) |
Thanks again Sammi   , I think this is so far my third poem that does that.
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Re: I Fear the Feast
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by Pujakins on Saturday, December 17, 2011 (17:29:07) |
Good poem, I'm surprised you didn't post it under dark, as both this one and the last one I read seem to belong in that category. However, regardless, it is an excellent effort and well polished, with lovely internal rhymes, which I always enjoy. Warm REgards, TAsha
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Re: I Fear the Feast
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by Loki on Sunday, December 18, 2011 (13:04:35) |
I always wonders which categories to post under, then I get excited to post an just pop them undet general haha, but thank I enjoy striving for a good internal
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