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Poems - Fall Tempo

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Fall Tempo

by Pujakins

Like a flock of birds.
leaves scatter toward me.
Trees magnificent in their final glory;
enclose me with alleys of gold and brown
Soon the wind will reap the gold,
hide it in the earth, a dragon hoard,
that crumbles, becoming earth.

Brown and yellow swirling,
twirling their curling edges
rustling together as they drift,
leaves descend then rise
swirled by a little dust devil
air current mini whirl-of-wind.

Fluttering leaves mirror restless fall,
teasing with bright gold days
in the midst of grey ones.
The wind bites, excites,
rubs briskly with a loving hand,
polishing and sharpening wits.
The keen wind scurries the clouds,
shepherding them across changeable skies.

Fall's message is on the wind:
All is change, and growth,





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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Tuesday, December 13, 2011 (09:58:55)
a lovely picture! nature giving us an important message.
love and regards,
D.

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Tuesday, December 13, 2011 (12:29:55)
    Thank you so much! You are so good to me. I love what you say. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Friday, December 16, 2011 (06:05:24)
A stunning piece of work. very well done. one of your best I love it. thanks for posting Take care. best wishes. pete. LOL .

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Friday, December 16, 2011 (06:05:25)
A stunning piece of work. very well done. one of your best I love it. thanks for posting Take care. best wishes. pete. LOL .

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Friday, December 16, 2011 (23:39:03)
    Hi Pete, Glad to know you liked it, it is always a treat to hear from you and I thank you for coming by and for making such a nice comment. Love and Blessings to you, Tasha

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by Loki on Saturday, December 17, 2011 (05:37:35)
Beatiful take on the season, Fall is my season so I may be biased but ha this was lovely. Love the rythms that pop along the poem as well.

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Sunday, December 18, 2011 (18:24:08)
    Thanks so much for your kind comment, I appreciate your stopping by and your interesting sharing. I am enjoying my perusal of your poems as well. Warm Wishes, Tasha

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Saturday, December 17, 2011 (07:03:13)
The images are thrilling, how so well they blend in that piece.
Its good to read your poems again after a long break.

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Sunday, December 18, 2011 (18:25:18)
    Thank you Ossy, it is always so good to hear from you and to know you are reading my poems. I'll go rate one of yours with my thanks, Hugs and Blessings, TAsha

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by FuchsiaFestival! on Sunday, December 18, 2011 (19:21:17)
You are an extremely collective reader and writer, one who should always be cherished. <3

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Tuesday, December 20, 2011 (23:30:54)
    Dear Sammi, I am so grateful for your kind comment. Being cherished is a great blessing, I feel honored to be. Thank you so much. Warm Wishes and a hug, Tasha

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      Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
      by FuchsiaFestival! on Tuesday, December 20, 2011 (23:32:31)
      You are more than welcome. Smile

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by floatingpoet on Wednesday, December 21, 2011 (16:25:04)
Nice!

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Thursday, December 22, 2011 (22:19:25)
    Thanks for stopping by and your kind comment. Warmly, Tasha

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      Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
      by floatingpoet on Thursday, December 22, 2011 (22:32:20)
      I stopped by again Hi! I just posted one called "why pick the mushroom when you could have the cow" maybe you stop by and get a laugh from your old Capt. Mike

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        Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
        by Pujakins on Thursday, December 22, 2011 (22:36:57)
        I did, so there! Looking forward o seing more of your poems. I'll put you on my buddy list, will you do the same with me? Warm Wishes, TAsha

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Saturday, December 31, 2011 (00:20:42)
oh Tasha this is so beautifully penned. "Brown and yellow swirling,
twirling their curling edges" is a particularly wonderful phrase and there is some really lovely imagery throughout. nicely done.

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Monday, January 02, 2012 (00:28:39)
    Ah, thank you, you are most kind. I do love words, and using them to ceate sund that moves the poem along. Such fun to write! Thanks for your comment and for stopping by. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (00:32:06)
a wonderful poem i liked your tale as autumn creep in. thank you for your comment on SPIDERS WEB

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    Re: Fall Tempo (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (17:50:21)
    Thanks, Friend, for coming by and for commenting. Always so grateful for all coments. Warm Wishes, Tasha

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