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Angela's Italian Washer

by Pujakins

Around it goes
and then it rests,
the valiant washing machine,
like laborers
who climb the hills
and stop to rest between.
And when it's done
and stops for good,
the clothes within are clean,
this stop and start,
exert/relax
Italian washing machine.





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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by sedubah on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (09:29:59)
Pujakins,

how is the word "valient" used?

i like the rhythm of the piece.

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    Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (22:26:32)
    It's valiant, sorry, I misspelled it. I've applied to have it corrected. The valiant washer is brave, chugging on through thick and think. Make sense? Thanks for stopping by and for commenting. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (10:33:22)
Perfect composition and rhyme! And funny! Love it!

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    Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (22:38:58)
    Thanks, you are most kind. I appeciate your stopping by and also your friendly words. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (11:04:45)
Bravo. A very clean poem indeed. I have a fairly new washer myself. it's great. well done. best wishes. a 10 and a heart. pete. lol .

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (11:04:46)
Bravo. A very clean poem indeed. I have a fairly new washer myself. it's great. well done. best wishes. a 10 and a heart. pete. lol .

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by Mr_Charles on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (15:35:36)
Wow! this is great. Loved the way you looked beyond the washer and seem to give it life. I enjoyed reading.

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    Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (22:45:22)
    So glad you liked my silly poem. It was fun to write. and it si true. I had never seen a washing machine like it, however it is typical of the Italian ones--she lives in Italy, my daughter. Hugs and blessings, Tasha

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Tuesday, January 03, 2012 (22:12:25)
lol very nice my friend, thank you

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by ken2shoes on Wednesday, January 04, 2012 (11:51:13)
great use of an ordinary appliance to give insight into the human condition. Nice work!!!

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by kenmoorecowboypoet on Wednesday, January 04, 2012 (20:46:57)
Brought a big smile to my face. Enjoyed

wabl
KenMoore
cowboypoet

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (04:52:14)
Good fun, Tasha!

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by floatingpoet on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (11:21:10)
neat and fun what a good person you are. the song of cloths drying. have a great day. come find out the secret of the universe with me and read my latest post. the last paragraph will blow your mind

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (15:20:31)
hey! great poem! the washing machine took on a life all it's own and actually quite a beautiful one. love the composition of this poem. lovely piece!

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (23:02:22)
So vivid and colorful, Tasha - love the action/reaction.
Cheers my friend, Mary Ann

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Friday, January 06, 2012 (21:45:21)
Dear Fellow Poets, I am overwhelmed by your appreciation of my humble poem. Thank you. I appreciate all of you for stopping by and for saying all those nice things.

Warm Wishes to all, Tasha

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by K13739 on Saturday, January 07, 2012 (16:55:44)
Tasha, I do believe that the washing machine is the best invention ever!!! I realised that when my daughter was about 4 and I didn't have one for about 5 months.... Great write!

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    Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Saturday, January 07, 2012 (22:29:22)
    Many thnks for your kind visit and comment. I know what you mean!!! Kids do make laundry, and how! Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Sunday, January 08, 2012 (17:32:31)


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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Sunday, January 08, 2012 (17:35:15)
Nice rhythm for a quaint and lovely poem . Good work Tasha.

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Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (19:33:44)
a good piece it was a bit funny but funny is good. thank your comment on my poem

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    Re: Angela's Italian Washer (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Sunday, January 15, 2012 (23:37:00)
    Many Thanks and best wishes. Let's be sure to keep up with one another's poetry. Warm Wishes, Tasha

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