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Poems - for a lady
| | for a ladyby omegapaf
she has ten tiny toes
i'd follow her anywhere she goes
in the same ways that our blood flows
makes us bend like archers bows
like cupid's arrow at the target
she hits my heart
being apart
is like being tangled in a net
i miss her like the deserts miss the rain
like the broken rope misses the strain
when i can't hear her voice and see the light in those eyes
a part of me dies.........and a part of me frys.
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Re: for a lady
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by graphitegirl on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (02:17:34) |
and it's not even Valentines yet. Paul you haven't been hit by a stray arrow have you? "like the deserts miss the rains" makes me think of Sade. I love that.. Cheers Michelle
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (10:36:13) |
oh, there might be a few arrows flying about michelle. that cupid fellow is a tricky little devil. i don't think i've heard that sade song. maybe i heard it while i was asleep and unconciously plagerised it ha ha - your friend - paul.
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Re: for a lady
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by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (08:20:11) |
Lovely, soft and romantic classical write. Time warp into the renissiance!
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (10:46:37) |
i tried to give it a sort of classical tone with archers and cupid and deserts and stuff - " lets do the time warp again " - pauly and the love hound.
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Re: for a lady
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by deepali on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (08:54:03) |
A beautiful poem, dear Paul!
love it!
warm wishes,
ali.
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (10:50:51) |
thanks ali star. one of those poems that was a pleasure to write. some of my poems are quite painful to produce......probably painful to read too ha ha - paul and the sun hound.
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Re: for a lady
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by Zbird on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (15:06:58) |
such sweetness! now tell me this isn't for lady jessica  . love the poem! you have such a soft heart... which I guess is better than a soft head!
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Thursday, January 05, 2012 (16:21:32) |
ha ha. no. not for lady jessica. i just tried to send you a second message and it didn't go....i knew g.p. was on the fritz today, but i thought i'd risk it.....aaaarrrrrggghhhhh - soft hearts and hard heads are easily broken - paul and the not so ladylike jessica who stinks like a broken victorian sewage pipe today ha ha.
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Re: for a lady
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by badmalthus on Sunday, January 08, 2012 (23:27:13) |
You ol' romantic you...Cupid's lucky the French never caught him...otherwise they would've cut off his fingers...V for victory...V for love Paul.
Peace & Laughter...Harry
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Monday, January 09, 2012 (10:46:08) |
aaawww you're a bit of an old romantic yourself harry. under that bluff aussie exterior. how do you know that story about the french cutting off english archers fingers, so they couldn't fire their bows? i thought i was the only person that had read that ha ha - you can't say love without a v - paul and the " will you bloody stop that jessica !!!! " hound.
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Re: for a lady
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by wolfinwindow on Tuesday, January 10, 2012 (13:57:58) |
That is so romantic. I loved it. You have a soft touch when it comes to some special lady. Good job
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Wednesday, January 11, 2012 (00:27:40) |
thanks wolfie. special ladies are very rare....especially in my city, where they are as rare as dodo eggs ha ha - foxy and the pupster.
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Re: for a lady
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by Temptress on Tuesday, January 10, 2012 (23:33:13) |
Maybe it's me your writing about LOL it's that lucky Jessica again isn't it very sweet Paul I like this side of you
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Wednesday, January 11, 2012 (00:37:43) |
oh, i couldn't possibly say who the poem is about my temptress....i'm far too much of a gentleman for that....though the lady knows - heyyyy i'm sweet as honey, but without the bee sting ha ha - paul and puppy.
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Re: for a lady
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by Porrohman on Thursday, January 26, 2012 (10:49:47) |
'Some people wanna fill the world with silly love songs. And what's wrong with that?'
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Friday, January 27, 2012 (14:08:02) |
indeed...happy birthday kidder.
" will you still feed me when i'm 64? " the beatles.
gonna do the fried onion ring thing, then i'll be up to get beaten at chess - paul and the lady hound.
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Re: for a lady
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by starstruck13 on Saturday, January 28, 2012 (17:52:41) |
a good poem it will be valentines day soon
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Monday, January 30, 2012 (23:09:32) |
thanks for reminding me star. it's my hound dogs birthday on valentines day - love and peace - paul.
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Re: for a lady
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by K13739 on Sunday, February 05, 2012 (07:51:49) |
Ooops, I can't believe I missed this little gem. Loved "the deserts missed the rain" (great song).
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Re: for a lady
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by omegapaf on Thursday, September 06, 2012 (23:56:10) |
oops. missed your comment paula. whatcha up to little lady?
yes. the deserts do miss the rain- paul and the eating the carpet hound....sigh.
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