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Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color

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Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color
by Gail Wolper

Cachexic, laying upon bed
wisps of grey hair
on linen
visitors left but he
remained surrounded by
tulips, daffodils, hyacinths,
brilliant color





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Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, February 10, 2012 (14:34:02)
oooowwwww only got this one on the second read. reminded me of the smell of dead flowers in my mothers death room at hospital - sorry i can't think of anything else to say - pauly.

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    Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Friday, February 10, 2012 (20:08:22)
    Cachexic means ematiation due to cancer or other terminal wasting. The vibrant flowers symbolize rebirth. The selection of bulb flowers, which regenerate themselves, is deliberate.
    Sorry, Paul, i write poems with no malice, no intent to hurt you or anyone else.

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Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (06:58:50)
Oh.............!
great moment capture, dear Gail!

wonder, what made you think of this.....
love,
D.

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    Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (12:03:33)
    Sometimes, I wonder too! They just come.

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      Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
      by butterflyzrfree on Wednesday, February 15, 2012 (13:43:47)
      Did you know I was a nurse for twenty years? I saw much.

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Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Saturday, February 11, 2012 (21:10:30)
The roman figure had me reading this over again but the brilliant colors and all what sits by stirred a thought of keeping alive against all odds. Wishing you the best.

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    Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, February 14, 2012 (22:43:53)
    Thank you, ossy! Death and rebirth can also be beautiful...

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Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Sunday, February 12, 2012 (19:47:12)
Damn this is good Gail.
Cheers...Harry

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    Re: Moment Capture XXXXI--brilliant color (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, February 14, 2012 (22:44:45)
    Thanks goddammit Harry! You are too nice!@!!!!! Wink
    Gail

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