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Twisted rort

by Gary

It ought it ought 
I sat and thought 
as I caught the should
of a twisted rort 
If I can the can't and
will the won't 
Or ignored the nor 
The core of dont,
I'd say, out loud 
"You can the can'ts 
And will the wonts
For life is naught 
With do's and "dont's"

I say, I seek, 
Suffice it seems, 
This trouble 
exemplified in dreams, 

It ought it ought 
I sat and thought 
as I caught the
should of a twisted rort 





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Re: Twisted rort (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (22:44:08)
I had trouble grasping this one at first, but rereading paid off and I think it's very cleverly and effectively done! I like the creativity of it.

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    Re: Twisted rort (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (23:08:12)
    Sure wus tricky to write mun
    English a difficult language
    Haitian easier fir sure
    Thank you.

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      Re: Twisted rort (Score: 1 )
      by Ozymandias on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (23:12:24)
      If you're from Haiti, then I give you extra kudos for managing to write so well in English!

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        Re: Twisted rort (Score: 1 )
        by Gary on Wednesday, March 14, 2012 (23:14:27)
        THank You now 3am back to bed!
        Gary

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