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Paper Moon

by opalkoi

Paper Moon

We are all stark naked ghost
Born of wild earth
Children of nature
Sewn with flesh and hope
Spirit flows within
Like wind over water
I howl with my pen
My words to the paper moon





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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Sunday, March 25, 2012 (09:24:31)
This is delightful. Very deep and smooth. I like the way you write.

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (07:32:21)
    Thanks so much for your comment , I was inspired to write this after reading White Fang by Jack London , I love his take on nature and his ability to feel at one with it and expressing that creative force that joins man and nature together ~

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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Monday, March 26, 2012 (11:04:54)
wow i had to read this 3 times to let all your words infuse me with this delightful poem thank you for your comment on spring time by 4 poets we had a blast writing that one i cant wait for fri when we all can get on and do some poems it will be such great fun. you was on 1 spot a day or 2 ago cong you are a popular poet in here, and i certainly do agree so we need to start thinking as to what we might write about this week and i hope tony can join us...talk with you soon

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (07:33:41)
    Thanks for your comment , Can't wait to talk with you soon , as always you inspire me !

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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, March 27, 2012 (11:44:26)
Intriguing and original. Did you miss the "n" at the end of the last word? Otherwise, a wonderful short piece.

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (07:30:00)
    Thank you for your comment and thanks for pointing out the missing "n" in my poem , how embarassing Embarassed ....where is the paper cow haha ~ Joy

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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by kylebank on Wednesday, March 28, 2012 (14:47:38)
"sewn with flesh and hope" - very beautiful

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Thursday, March 29, 2012 (08:49:50)
    Thank you for your comment I appreciate it Very Happy

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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Thursday, March 29, 2012 (04:45:34)
Great choice of phrases. Maybe you typed in a hurry or something, since I figure in L1 you meant "ghost" to be plural. A trivial point about a fine poem.

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Thursday, March 29, 2012 (08:54:18)
    Thanks for pointing that out to me and glad that you enjoyed it thanks for reading

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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Thursday, March 29, 2012 (09:47:19)
A wonderful write, friend!
A ten and a heart for this super vision.
D.

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (05:02:37)
    Thanks very much for your comment I am glad that you enjoyed it Smile

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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by zoe_in_a_bubble on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (10:28:43)
primal...very good short piece

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Monday, April 02, 2012 (05:27:37)
    Thank you for you comment ~ opalkoi Smile I like that you described it as primal that one word does describe it to a t ~ opalkoi

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Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Monday, April 02, 2012 (08:18:56)
wonderfully provocative and well written.

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    Re: Paper Moon (Score: 1 )
    by opalkoi on Monday, April 02, 2012 (10:33:17)
    thank you for your comment : ) I appreciate it ~opalkoi

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