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Poems - The Seven

The Seven

by kapilsharma

This's the Time, the final hour.
We are coming, with the ultimate power!
Are you still lost in your pride?
Beating all the Horses to ride?

Through the frozen lakes and burning forest,
The place where the Lion rest;
Ran we when the fourteen legs pace.
And the Trees sways; sways and sways.

East to West the 'Sun' face,
That's how 'It' start and decays.
Thus 'It' vary as the Time flee.
And will again so its worthy,
'Now' to prove who are We!

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Friday, March 30, 2012 (08:18:48)

wow! powerful and poignant write! that first verse really draws the reader in... are yo still lost in your pride? beating all the horses to ride? truly inspired lines!

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by kapilsharma on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (00:27:54)

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (07:54:28)

A good write but did not get the significance of the seven. The poem is a little vague, but parts of it are very good. And it is interesting! I want to know what it is talking about!

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by kapilsharma on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (08:02:00)

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Saturday, March 31, 2012 (12:32:35)

i liked all the lines that you wrote but especial liked through the frozen lakes and burning forest, the place where lions sleep those lines made me think of an old poem i read not to long ago and i see in your writes a raw talent burning to be released so keep your pen flowing and keep writing my friend

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by kapilsharma on Sunday, April 01, 2012 (00:33:07)

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by opalkoi on Monday, April 02, 2012 (05:05:04)

Your poem has great intensity and a good flow , I agree with Starstruck I to enjoyed the frozen lakes and burning forest , its striking imagery . I liked the line of the 14 legs pace as well . Good work and keep it up and welcome to gotpoetry : )

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by kapilsharma on Monday, April 02, 2012 (05:45:24)

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Monday, April 16, 2012 (17:20:40)

Indeed, who are We? Marvelously mystical visions here, Your writing is like the brush strokes of an abstract painter, taking something and disguising it in different colors and shapings, so that it amplifies the meaning quite wonderfully. Keep up the good work. Warm Wishes, Tasha

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Re: The Seven (Score: 1 )
by kapilsharma on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (22:12:06)

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