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Love was something else..

by deepali

sharing books with friends
at the library was fine;
scanning books at shelves
where you had spent some time,
was something else..

many a moonlit night
could make the poets write;
silver, that we stole
on terrace, the other night,
was something else..

thoughts are vagabonds,
keep gate crashing to the mind;
one such visitor,
who left moistened eyes behind,
was something else..

time heals deepest wounds,
helps to relegate the past;
painful, yet much prized,
an unhealed crack in heart,
was something else..


~deepali





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Re: that was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by elixandor on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (06:31:02)
wonderfully written! words bring out lot of unsaid emotions! Smile loved reading

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    Re: that was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (08:01:44)
    Thanks a ton, dear Sasha!
    lots of love and blessings,
    D.

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Re: that was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (09:22:26)
beautifully written with so much emotion in each verse. I especially enjoyed the first verse.

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    Re: that was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (14:07:01)
    Thanks a lot, Bonnie!
    I'm so happy you liked it.
    fond regards,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by kapilsharma on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (10:33:57)
I got no words to say!!! What a write Surprised Surprised Surprised Beautiful Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (14:08:43)
    You're too kind, dear Kapil!
    Thanks oceans!!
    lots of love,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (12:49:25)
reply poem in traditional fashion.

though books can sometimes become dusty
and unused wheels are rusty
it does not change what is within
even if time becomes thin
the silver moonlight captured in a jar
is still starlight that has travelled far.

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (14:10:53)
    That's really sweet of you..
    Please accept my heartfelt thanks!!
    warmest wishes,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (22:46:52)
G'day deepali...
'thoughts are vagabonds' - that's a great line deepali. How often do they come and go without realization.
Thank you deepali
Lindsay

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Monday, April 16, 2012 (09:33:24)
    Thanks a ton, Lindsay!
    Your comment is always appreciated!!
    warm wishes,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Monday, April 16, 2012 (05:56:43)
Excellent writing. I like all the stanzas, but particularly the third.

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Monday, April 16, 2012 (09:37:38)
    Heartfelt Thanks, Rory!
    I find my work, too simple. but comments like these, really encourage me.
    gratefully,
    D.

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      Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
      by Ozymandias on Monday, April 16, 2012 (10:51:07)
      Simplicity is a great virtue. I find many of my poems not simple enough.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 16, 2012 (12:21:35)
Very passionate without melodrama..elegant language and form. This is excellent writing.

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Monday, April 16, 2012 (12:37:19)
    You've made my day!
    Please accept my heartfelt thanks!!
    respectfully,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Monday, April 16, 2012 (20:07:18)
Never discount the "simple" verse - many times those are the most profound - like in this very expressive write!

Sandy

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (07:58:11)
    Thanks for always being there to encourage me, dearest Sandy!
    lots of love,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (07:54:06)
Life it’s self is something else. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack Laughing Crying or Very sad

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (06:20:25)
    Thanks a lot, Jack!
    regards,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by paperboat on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (13:59:30)
Lovely imagery. Beautiful flow of emotions.

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (07:55:49)
    Thanks a lot, dear Ashesh!
    glad you liked it!
    warm wishes,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Tuesday, April 17, 2012 (16:03:54)
Love those vagabond thoughts, Deepali... the very lifeblood of fine poetry like this! Lovely from beginning to end. Cheers, Mary Ann

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (08:01:11)
    Thanks oceans, Mary Ann!
    what's keeping you busy?
    waiting for your next write,
    D.

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      Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
      by maryanns on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (16:17:52)
      Tee-hee, ok... thanks for the nudge!
      When life gives you lemons, make lemon tea! Wink

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by PTROCK4950 on Wednesday, April 18, 2012 (18:59:19)
This is a warm and beautiful write, some degree of nostalgia and also hope. Nicely written.

Cheers.

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (08:51:20)
    Thanks a lot, dear Pete!
    glad to have you here.
    warm wishes,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Friday, April 20, 2012 (09:28:36)
This is a beautiful write in which the refrain makes it easy to smoothly cover a lot of ground. I find this a high quality one! It's something else! Very Happy

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Friday, April 20, 2012 (11:32:00)
    Thanks, my friend! Smile
    love,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Friday, April 20, 2012 (11:12:04)
thats the pepper...thats what I'm taking about....yummy rhymes twixt dramatic pause and deep thinking...nice work poet Very Happy

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Friday, April 20, 2012 (11:34:18)
    Thanks, Rondo!
    Your comment means a lot to me.
    warm wishes,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by Glen on Sunday, April 29, 2012 (08:23:28)
very nice poem ali well written ,i like the line thoughts are vagabounds

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Sunday, April 29, 2012 (10:24:48)
    An honor to get a comment from you!
    Thanks a ton, Glen!!
    warm wishes,
    D.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by pinnas on Sunday, May 20, 2012 (12:25:52)
silver, that we stole
on terrace, the other night,
was something else..

What a dleicate thought, the poem stole my heart. Lovely write Pali.

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Sunday, May 20, 2012 (12:47:17)
    You got it....some memories are etched on our heart ...forever!!
    some moonlit nights are special.
    love,
    pali.

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Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
by Mayah on Saturday, June 30, 2012 (09:04:31)
Loved the 3rd stanza ... Great work! Mayah

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    Re: Love was something else.. (Score: 1 )
    by deepali on Sunday, July 01, 2012 (02:50:29)
    Thanks a lot, dear Mayah! I'm happy you liked it.
    D.

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