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Serenade

by FuchsiaFestival!

flamenco wings
flying, serenade
above gravity:
the soul’s libretto.

minds sway softly
to the heartbeat of triangles
chiming:
musical cerebrum.

a mosaic,
a harmony,
an approximate light kneels
down:
astronomy in sound.

a mallet,
a sigh,
sonatas lit with
fractal tones:
holy ghost song.

virtuoso
spitting out solos,
atoms drained in cadence:
the heart’s aquarelle.

eyes parasitic to
florid orchestrations
stare into the melody:
a starlit abyss.

rhapsody,
dear rhapsody,
structures unveil
the underline unknown.





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Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, April 15, 2012 (22:40:31)
Incredible musical venture into surrealism. Excellent!

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    Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (07:47:21)
    Thank you, Gail, for the feedback! I appreciate your help in the forums.

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Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Monday, April 16, 2012 (17:57:20)
Interesting images cascade across the eyelids as I read. And the implied music out of color is superb. Nicely done. Warm Wishes, Tasha

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    Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (07:47:54)
    Thanks, I'm glad you could feel the color. That was my only intention.

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Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Monday, April 16, 2012 (20:16:42)
Sammi, your amazing combination of sound, color, texture and music is a feast for the eyes. Wonderfully done!

Sandy

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    Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (07:48:14)
    Sandy, thank you for that. I appreciate your words. Smile

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Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Thursday, April 19, 2012 (11:13:23)
I really enjoyed this musically colorful piece. Good Job.

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    Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Monday, June 04, 2012 (05:50:10)
    Thanks, I appreciated it. I was listening to electronica.

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Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
by wordsmithwannabe on Saturday, April 28, 2012 (23:52:52)
i like the way the words seem to fall down the page in song, it makes for a lovely read. nicely done, my friend.

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Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Monday, May 14, 2012 (23:26:26)
CREATIVE GENIUS!

You use your words to
paint a picture of what Music
really is. I really enjoy reading
it. Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

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    Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
    by FuchsiaFestival! on Monday, June 04, 2012 (05:50:34)
    I wouldn't go that far, really. I appreciate this comment, how are you?

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Re: Serenade (Score: 1 )
by Ecsentret on Saturday, September 01, 2012 (16:08:57)
Your descriptions are so vivid and gorgeous! I loved every line.

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