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Poems - ANGEL PHUEL

ANGEL PHUEL

by starstruck13

I bring fresh rain showers,
for the thirsty flowers,
from the seas' and the streams.

I bear light shade for the green leaves,
when laid in their noonday dreams.

I am a pool of water reflecting heavens in its depths.
I feel the power of the waterfall as it descends,
to the sea,
of life and back again.

Hear the ancient call of wild life,
gliding over the sea of dreams,
to a haunted,
to a haunted shore of songs,
that dream.

I am angel, PHUEL,
I am guardian over the sea's of Earth.

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Re: ANGEL PHUEL (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Tuesday, May 01, 2012 (19:20:37)

A fine poem and a good illustration to go with it, that adds nicely. One small suggestion: Do lose the apostrophes they are not needed there. There is no contraction to seas unless it is "of the sea," and it does not look from the sense of the line that it is. Many do find apostrophes confusing. Hope you don't mind my mentioning it. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

PS Where did you come up with the angel's name?

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Re: ANGEL PHUEL (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Wednesday, May 02, 2012 (10:42:14)

Just beautiful. I could vision this poem as I read. Great job. Very Happy

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