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Poems - Train, Part 1

Train, Part 1

by fogglethorpe

The copper leaves,
the goldenrod-
they mingle on the track
that splits our town;

and yet, the ten o'clock
is never late.

Copyright © 2012 by Hugh Lemma- All rights reserved

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Re: Train, Part 1 (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, April 30, 2012 (01:14:00)

Very very clever, you sly guy! Gail Very Happy

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Re: Train, Part 1 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 30, 2012 (10:14:03)

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Re: Train, Part 1 (Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Monday, April 30, 2012 (08:59:23)

Very nice. Good write

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Re: Train, Part 1 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Monday, April 30, 2012 (10:14:28)

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Re: Train, Part 1 (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, May 06, 2012 (16:50:42)

the ten o' clock is always full of scottish drunks around here and the train is cancelled because of the wrong type of leaves on the line - i can play the train on the harmonica, just not in real life. nicely done hugh - paul and steam train hound.

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Re: Train, Part 1 (Score: 1 )
by zoe_in_a_bubble on Tuesday, May 15, 2012 (16:24:38)

Wow, love the metaphors here.

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