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Poems - Fire Petals

Fire Petals

by Pujakins

The flame
comes from the sun,
from wood
grown in the light,
from wood
cut from a tree,
set afire
to release the heat of the sun
As it bursts into new life
its blossom warms me.

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by Mr_Charles on Wednesday, May 30, 2012 (10:19:35)

This is great. "grown from light", "its blossoms warms me". These are what makes your poems so wonderful. The way you express your thoughts. I love your work. Great write!

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Wednesday, May 30, 2012 (16:18:38)

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Wednesday, May 30, 2012 (12:59:06)

Beautifully written. Like the image I saw reading this one. Very Happy

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Wednesday, May 30, 2012 (16:22:38)

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by alana on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (05:26:23)

only you can think up something like flame petals, for me it is all burn or run

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (21:31:49)

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (15:27:50)

I love it when someone comes up with something so deferent that the rest of us say now I see it! You have revealing eyes. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (21:35:03)

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Friday, June 01, 2012 (14:52:26)

I love the idea of fire blossoming to warm me. Its a beautiful little piece. Hugs Very Happy

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Monday, June 04, 2012 (04:02:22)

G'day Tasha...
Fire can become our greatest friend or our worst enemy. In your poem fire is a friend.
Thank you Tasha
Lindsay

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by FuchsiaFestival! on Monday, June 04, 2012 (05:14:02)

Flame petals is a very intriguing idea, and this was a very wise write. I hope perhaps I can write a "flame" poem and use it for symbolic purposes. You did this well.

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Re: Fire Petals (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, June 05, 2012 (21:24:32)

wow! what amazing images created with this poem! very intriguing and unique.

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