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'programmed face you wear' stands out in this well written poem.

'programmed face you (Score: 1 ) by diannone on Saturday, June 16, 2007 (12:24:44)

Induce...thanks so much for reading my poem and commenting. Best wishes, Don Iannone


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Such a touching poem. A youthful and hopeful outlook on the world around us always helps the heart! To see things in such an open and unjudgemental way is true peace for me!

Such a touching poem (Score: 1 ) by diannone on Saturday, June 16, 2007 (15:26:18)

Thanks Blondie. Much appreciated. Your comments are very true for me as well. Best wishes, Don Iannone


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There is some fine sentiment and wordplay in this poem. Nice work.

There is some fine s (Score: 1 ) by diannone on Saturday, June 16, 2007 (20:52:30)

Thanks Sinema. I appreciate you comment and rating. Best wishes, Don Iannone


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very classy, wise piece; didn't over state the case

very classy, wise pi (Score: 1 ) by diannone on Sunday, June 17, 2007 (07:13:13)

lordfuznut..Thanks for the comment and vote. Best wishes, Don Iannone


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Oh, I really love this! I suppose one must reach a certain age to truely appreciate it, as I see some of the rates are not so high! My son became engaged last night and you see them as the baby they once were...and my youngest is 15 so I have that younth to watch spring into adulthood now. One 15 and one 16. It is so much fun, and waiting for a grand child, which, from your photo, you may already have...Lovely write!