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looked

by orangetulips12

the mirror hung on the wall
by the bedroom door

it was one that showed
everything

i would stare at
the person in the mirror
and ask did i know her...

no answers
no mirror, mirror on the
who's the prettiest of them all

no replay
now as i pass
the mirrow hung on wall
by the bedroom door

it turns its head.....




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Re: looked (Score: 1 )
by Glen on Monday, June 18, 2012 (09:11:48)
move that mirror ,where it cant turnits head

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    Re: looked (Score: 1 )
    by orangetulips12 on Monday, June 18, 2012 (09:36:56)
    Glen, that sound like a great idea.... there are many who fight eating disorder. the fight with a mirror is unbelieveble....
    thank for reading and commenting...Karen

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Re: looked (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Friday, October 19, 2012 (05:01:23)
Karen, I struggle with mirrors too, stems back to comments in childhood, to anyone with Body Dismorphia or an eating disorder, my heart goes out to them. thank you for writing this. warm best wishes. Pete.

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    Re: looked (Score: 1 )
    by orangetulips12 on Friday, October 19, 2012 (17:52:20)
    TygerTyger, i know a few that struggle with eating disorder. It is very hard.... thank you for your comment it mean alot to me.... karen

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Re: looked (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, November 03, 2012 (08:43:12)
wow...powerfully emotional and gets right to the heart. well written.

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    Re: looked (Score: 1 )
    by orangetulips12 on Sunday, November 04, 2012 (16:43:17)
    Zbird, thank you for reading and commenting.... karen




    hopes and dreams.

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Re: looked (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Monday, December 17, 2012 (00:12:38)
Yea that's a wow poem. filled with good imagery and it had me wishing for more. Lol. Peace . ;linda

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    Re: looked (Score: 1 )
    by orangetulips12 on Friday, December 21, 2012 (00:34:02)
    Thanks Linda, when i wrote it, it suprised me in what directions it went.... some of my poems have a mind of there own... karen

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