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Poems - Because I'm A Teenager
I am quite older than you and my youngest is 17 herself. Anyway I wrote a piece similar to this about " the girl I am" and I found myself shaking me head as I read you poem. First because I remember when I was your age and wild as could be! Sound almost the same as you. I also compare the piece I just wrote about me at 47 and how obviously different it know is. You have raw talent here. I'd love to see you keep writing and develop it further.
feel they have to find the means
to show they are real people
like the bells in a church steeple
ring out with screams here I am
when life is really just a sham
the poem brings life to hurt and pain
of being young with nothing to gain
it cries out in every line and word
just wanted to let you know I heard.
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