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Poems - Because I'm A Teenager
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I am quite older than you and my youngest is 17 herself. Anyway I wrote a piece similar to this about " the girl I am" and I found myself shaking me head as I read you poem. First because I remember when I was your age and wild as could be! Sound almost the same as you. I also compare the piece I just wrote about me at 47 and how obviously different it know is. You have raw talent here. I'd love to see you keep writing and develop it further. -LMB xoxo
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feel they have to find the means to show they are real people like the bells in a church steeple ring out with screams here I am when life is really just a sham the poem brings life to hurt and pain of being young with nothing to gain it cries out in every line and word just wanted to let you know I heard.
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