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Sleep - A Chance To Renew

by Phoebe

My days are filled with busyness
And often there’s a lot of stress
I love my work but it can be
A great drain on my energy

When I get home, too tired to eat
I head for bed, and slumber sweet
A brief thought for my busy day
Then leave it back in yesterday

As night plays with my tiredness
I drift away on its caress
Gentle fingers close my eyes
And to its will I softly rise

My hand clasped in the hand of sleep
We journey to its portals deep
Filled with sweet expectancy
I let its magic come to me

I find within its dark domain
The reasons always why I came
It restores all my energy
and gives me back a brand new me.

~ Phoebe~





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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Thursday, July 05, 2012 (16:09:43)
I have been the victim of stress at work in the past and have had to take time out because of it. Though these days I have learnt not to take my work home with me. It can be very hard especially if you are a caring person. But I think it's important to be able to have our own time to unwind and refresh ourselves, otherwise we carry the burdens of the world around us and never seem to focus on our own well being.

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Thursday, July 05, 2012 (23:12:52)
    It's horrible being human sometimes, especially when working with people struggling - having to deal with lives filled with anger, pain and all points in between - it's a luxury to take off those issues and hide in the blessed relief of one's private space... I know what you're saying Wayne.. Smile Phoebe

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Friday, July 06, 2012 (08:28:59)
This is a pleasing and gentle weave!
Love it!
warm wishes,
D.

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (16:45:13)
    Thank you my lovely friend I'm so glad you enjoyed... Very Happy Phoebe

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Friday, July 06, 2012 (08:56:29)
Yaaawwwnnning stretchiing blinking eyes
one more poem between the sighs
Phoebe will be just the trick
to lul me into slumber quick Very Happy xoxoxo

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (16:51:50)
    All you do is close your eyes
    Slip between those tired sighs
    And we'll tumble hand in hand
    All the way to slumber land Very Happy xoxoxo

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      Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
      by rondo on Friday, July 06, 2012 (20:57:06)
      If you were here! there would be no sleeping
      only a lot of loves bounty reaping
      sweet poetic inspiration
      lasting for the nights duration Laughing xoxoxo

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        Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
        by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (22:48:49)
        I’m told I’m an acquired taste
        With me there’s never any waste
        However, if you’re up for it
        I’ll organize a quick visit Wink xoxoxo

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          Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
          by rondo on Monday, July 09, 2012 (00:49:10)
          I'll pick you up at palm springs Int. or even L.A.X.
          and take you back to my place for some badly needed.....rest? Laughing xoxoxo

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            Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
            by Phoebe on Tuesday, July 10, 2012 (04:14:36)
            When you go to sleep tonight
            I'll be on that astral flight
            Heading for your cosy nest
            And that badly needed......rest? Very Happy xoxoxo

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Friday, July 06, 2012 (10:30:53)
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh! Boy did I sleep last night; I don't fight Insomnia she does not fight fare; I just go to sleep letting her fight with herself; then I wake-up refreshed; she is sleeping on my pillow and I go out leaving her right there so she want be exhausted when she wakes up. And for good measure I pull the curtain closed before leaving.

I love your poem and it is refreshing to read. BWP... James...

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (16:56:18)
    Delete?? Never!!...Thank you James for your dual diagnosis of my poem - you have no idea how immensely flattering that is but in reality (I know because this has happened to me many times) what actually happens is that we double send our posts because sometimes there may be a delay with the first and we think it never went - so we post it again - it's a glitch is all it is. Me, I prefer MY version, that you enjoyed my poem so much, you wanted to double deal it....and I'm glad you enjoyed it Very Happy Phoebe

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Friday, July 06, 2012 (10:32:08)
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOh! Boy did I sleep last night; I don't fight Insomnia she does not fight fare; I just go to sleep letting her fight with herself; then I wake-up refreshed; she is sleeping on my pillow and I go out leaving her right there so she want be exhausted when she wakes up. And for good measure I pull the curtain closed before leaving.

I love your poem and it is refreshing to read. BWP... James...

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by BrokenWordsPoet on Friday, July 06, 2012 (10:37:20)
    This never happened to me before. Please delete one of my pictures; but if you like them... -Well- Shocked

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      Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
      by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (22:49:35)
      Delete?? Never!!...Thank you James for your dual diagnosis of my poem - you have no idea how immensely flattering that is but in reality (I know because this has happened to me many times) what actually happens is that we double send our posts because sometimes there may be a delay with the first and we think it never went - so we post it again - it's a glitch is all it is. Me, I prefer MY version, that you enjoyed my poem so much, you wanted to double deal it....and I'm glad you enjoyed it Very Happy Phoebe

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, July 06, 2012 (14:30:32)
i love to go to sleep. though with the insomnia it's sometimes like being asleep when i'm awake...tricky to explain....getting kicked in the head by a hound dog doesn't help either ha ha - paora.

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (22:52:07)
    Yep I have moments of insomnia too, but it's getting less and less

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      Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
      by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (23:22:32)
      - dang I never signed off...Feebs... Laughing

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Friday, July 06, 2012 (17:45:42)
Atimes sleep could be the only healing portion
Easily affordable yet rarely available.
I think it is a priceless gift

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (23:23:35)
    And as a priceless gift we all have ownership of it...we need to really appreciate its value...thanks Ossy...Smile Phoebe

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Friday, July 06, 2012 (20:19:51)
I love to sleep as well. I find when the bones have done all they can a little doze is just enough to have them try again the next day. Good form on this poem.

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, July 06, 2012 (23:24:52)
    Thank you Girl, yes just a short doze is enough to iron out the tiredness...thanks...Smile Phoebe

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Wednesday, July 11, 2012 (12:33:37)
Ah, this really is how sleep feels to me as well... love the gentle rhythm and wonderful sense of peace in your poem. Go girl - this is really well done. Take care, Mary Ann

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Wednesday, July 11, 2012 (13:17:17)
    I really appreciate sleep but sometimes it can be elusive - I often wake up around 4am and find it very hard to get back to it even though I should.Of course, when it comes, it's most welcome...thank you Mary Ann, be well.. Very Happy

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Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
by jack1983 on Friday, November 02, 2012 (15:33:56)
Great poem on something most of us lack. Smile

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    Re: Sleep - A Chance To Renew (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Friday, November 02, 2012 (15:39:03)
    Thank you Jack, a truer word was never spoken...be well..Smile Phoebe

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