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Poems - When The Rainbows Are Gone

When The Rainbows Are Gone

by Phoebe

When the rainbows are gone
from the whispering skies
And the tears have all dried
from the Earth’s weary eyes
When the stars disappear
with the moon’s pale light
And the curtains are closed
on the windows of night
When existence has gone
From the land and the sea
I will always love you
Beyond infinity…

~Phoebe~

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (11:50:48)

Had fun reading this one

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (16:36:48)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (12:26:18)

Simply beautiful, my friend - gentle melody and sense of peace. Best wishes, Mary Ann

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (16:40:11)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (17:24:00)

the rainbows always fade
for that is why they are made
but it's better than the constant grey
the rainbows keep us here to stay.

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (21:48:30)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (11:32:55)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (21:30:21)

I am not going to leave a big comment. Just that this is PERFECT. Hugs dAVE

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, July 21, 2012 (21:50:49)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (06:20:15)

I'm lost for words with that one Phoebe.

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (06:56:37)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (08:32:58)

so lovely and soft - beautifully written.

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (15:44:37)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (09:15:02)

Smooth and tender as a lover’s kiss; I shall read this again and wander.
Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (15:45:21)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (15:45:42)

Wonderful classical write, in perfect form for genre!

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, July 23, 2012 (04:07:36)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Sunday, July 22, 2012 (19:09:28)

G'day Phoebe...
You are really good at composing these poems that have a calming effect Phoebe. Once again your rhyme and meter makes a pleasure to read.
Thank you Phoebe.
Lindsay

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, July 23, 2012 (04:08:48)

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by moonlighter_angel on Monday, July 23, 2012 (07:06:56)

...your poem surpasses the transient being of love...it conquers time so with space. enjoyed the rhythm and the soul of it --moon

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by jack1983 on Wednesday, July 25, 2012 (22:17:10)

What a wonderful read with a easy flow. Thanks for sharing! Smile

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Re: When The Rainbows Are Gone (Score: 1 )
by Infiniverse on Wednesday, August 01, 2012 (00:17:37)

Simple, short, with a timeless form. Very nice.

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