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Excuse me?

by Insolentmanx

Just a moment of your time,
Is all I'll ask of you.
You see there really is no one,
To bear my thoughts to.

My life, for lack of a better word,
Maybe hell would suffice.
Cause what's going on in my head and heart,
Is an awful painful price.

I've worn a mask, all through my life,
To hide from truths and lies,
Well I'm out of masks and fake smiles,
And no strength for another disguise.

Each day is filled with such despair
That mere words could not convey,
Except to say that misery,
Surely leads the way.

Some pray for, their soul to keep,
I pray for mine to take.
I feel it's near, it's at the door.
It's just the move...thats left to make.





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Re: Excuse me? (Score: 1 )
by TygerTyger on Thursday, September 13, 2012 (10:13:29)
This is just so sad friend. I often feel like this too. I feel so lonely it hurts, but I cling on. I just hope you don't always feel like this. You need to talk to someone, you have made a very brave start by writing from the heart, you may not realise it now, but for me, writing has become therapy.it helps get things off my chest. You express yourself very well, and are a really good poet, yes you have a talent, use it!.you'll find,your not so alone after all, many out their feel the same, and through barring your experience, you will be helping others. just be yourself, drop the mask. take good care. I hope to enjoy more of your work in the future. warm best wishes. Pete.

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    Re: Excuse me? (Score: 1 )
    by Insolentmanx on Thursday, October 04, 2012 (12:49:55)
    Thank you for your kind words tygerTyger, I do hope the things change.

    manx... Sad

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