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Poems - Whisper

Whisper

by LordBoomy

Whisper whisper wind
Leaves dancing wild carefree
Cotton-wool clouds gather

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Re: Whisper (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, July 24, 2012 (15:20:17)

what a beautiful scene you've created with these words!

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Re: Whisper (Score: 1 )
by LordBoomy on Tuesday, July 24, 2012 (20:53:13)

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Re: Whisper (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Thursday, August 09, 2012 (04:43:36)

I like the use of alliteration - creates a vivid image and just the right sound.

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Re: Whisper (Score: 1 )
by LordBoomy on Saturday, August 11, 2012 (10:56:04)

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Re: Whisper (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Monday, August 13, 2012 (01:59:13)

I love the opening line, really sets the scene.

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Re: Whisper (Score: 1 )
by LordBoomy on Monday, August 13, 2012 (13:06:04)

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