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Poems - observation #21

observation #21

by fogglethorpe

upper floor, birth
lower floor, death
outside, a freight train

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Re: observation #21 (Score: 1 )
by electrictiger on Tuesday, July 31, 2012 (14:55:57)

There is a sense of the metaphysical being gate-crashed by the mundane here that I think most of us appreciate only rarely; our whole existence could easily be overwhelmed by the ironic absurdity of it all if we chose to think of it at length.

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Re: observation #21 (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, July 31, 2012 (18:45:20)

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